Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/6/20, 4:26 PM
short but oh so hot!!!
2/6/20, 3:16 PM
Thanks again for the wonderful comments, everyone! I'm glad that the readers enjoyed this story well. Thank you also to the anonymous commenter who gave awesome ideas, you really helped me out. I will try to write more chapters to close of this series. I'm considering to write three more in total. I will have to see. It will take some time, though, since I want these chapters to have a fair amount of cont and satisfying action. Also, anyone who is willing to do some proofreading for me would be appreciated. just send me a message
Anonymous
2/6/20, 1:51 PM
Hot story!! Would love to see the daddy become his obedient slave and wait on his master hand and foot
Anonymous
2/6/20, 1:25 PM
I hope you do continue, Kyle – this story is *hot!* Given the focus on rugby players, I'd love to read a sequel focusing on the locker room or showers, where the slut musk is liberally sprayed, either on uniforms or jocks so that it releases slowly over the course of a day's practice, with the players becoming more and more horny and slutty as they sweat, run, grapple, and tackle each other. Would some lose control right there on the field? Or it could spray out of the shower heads, drenching the team in slut musk. Steam in the steam-room or sauna? Vaporizers in the locker room? There are so many possibilities, leading up to a full team slutty orgy! Of course, if Derek wants to take the whole team, you might want to do a chapter first where his three slut-cubs help him take down the hunky coach and assistant coach first...
Bart
2/6/20, 12:39 PM
great turn. keep on going with extreme transformations and hairstyles.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 12:07 PM
An amazing concept and your writing is superb! Can't wait to read more!
Anonymous
2/6/20, 11:22 AM
this is amazing ! please continue
Anonymous
2/6/20, 11:09 AM
Make their cocks leaky and their source of everyday food! Cumming gallons everyday.. mm daddy
Anonymous
2/6/20, 10:56 AM
Please do more !
Robert Chandler
2/6/20, 9:18 AM
This really turned me on and left me wanting more in the best way.