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12/7/24, 8:08 PM
i love these characters so much
12/7/24, 12:47 PM
Love all your stories. Joaquin’s journey is amazing and I can’t wait to see where you take him next. Hopefully he realises that Rundy is his future and not Danielle (and embraces his inner submissive slut!).

12/7/24, 7:12 PM
@[Marjangles](/user/show/910566) I think you will be pleasantly surprised.
12/7/24, 12:59 PM
Damn hot. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

12/7/24, 7:12 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thank you!
12/7/24, 7:11 PM
I love the build up. The whole premise, while not untried previously, is so novel here. I love how subtle the mindf*ck is, how everything seems just so right an natural. Brilliant storytelling. Can’t wait for more.
12/7/24, 6:55 PM
What a beautiful story of negotiated consensual Dominance and submission.
12/7/24, 6:39 PM
This is fast becoming a favorite. Hope part 3 comes quickly.
12/7/24, 6:36 PM
This looks good so far, Will Superman become a loyal and will slave to Lex, look forward to the next chapter
Anonymous
12/7/24, 6:28 PM
So hot!!! Can’t wait to see the next chapter 😍
12/7/24, 10:33 AM
You weren't kidding when you said this was darker than your usual chapters. However, amazing writing as always! I liked the dialogues with and between the nanobots. It was unique, sometimes funny and it presented his corruption excellently. It's also interesting to see how the difference in the "prime" personality affects the way they designate their drones and their relationship with them. I'm going to guess that a part of the "final battle" would be between Alex's nanobots and Rob's viruses to see who can convert whom. Out of curiosity, do you have your chapters written in advance or do you go with it as it evolves?

12/7/24, 4:27 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Hey, thank you for the kind words and feedback. I usually have an ending in mind pretty early in the writing process, but not a chapter-by-chapter breakdown. Knowing the ending helps me with guiding the story and with foreshadowing, but I let each chapter evolve as I’m writing it and occasionally I find a different ending than I was expecting while writing (but only if the new ending “feels” more meaningful or natural than the original one I had in mind.) I’m actually a little stuck with this story right now. I know the ending I think I want, but getting from here to there doesn’t have a roadmap. I’m working on it :wink: