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Geoff M
2/2/20, 3:33 PM
excitedly looking forward to the next chapter!
swngbthways@gmail.com
2/2/20, 3:00 PM
I bookmarked EVERY. SINGLE. CHAPTER. in my favorite stories. I CAN'T WAIT what happens next!
Feb 25, 2016
Ethan
2/2/20, 1:51 PM
Very erotic.
malskin
2/2/20, 1:10 PM
if this happens it will be one hell of a hot story blufman 1 is an extremely good writer
Anonymous
2/2/20, 9:20 AM
It's a neat idea, I guess. But the plot felt bizarre and unfocused. If I didn't have some knowledge into Marvel's greater lore this would've all been impossible to understand. Even with this just felt like I was being pulled along to random events and people I don't care about. And then all the grammatical issues. It was difficult getting through the plot, but the sentence structure was another beast to deal with. I'm glad to see people interested in writing. But I strongly suggest that you try working with a few drafts and revision edits beforehand.
2/2/20, 7:23 AM
I really enjoyed this and can't wait to see where you take the story next. Looking forward to enjoying the next part!
Anonymous
2/2/20, 6:27 AM
I cant wait for the next part of this.
Elm
2/2/20, 4:36 AM
Perfect as always!
Anonymous
2/2/20, 4:12 AM
Men have fantasies for the things they cannot have. Get over it!
Anonymous
2/2/20, 4:10 AM
Love to see arrogant pricks taken down. Good story!!