Recent Comments

Zander
12/7/24, 12:31 AM
Excellent chapter and continuation, I'm looking forward to the new part) I hope it comes out faster.

12/7/24, 2:09 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) As I explained at the top of this chapter, I made a mistake in editting and had a duplicate chapter, so this is a three chapter story instead of a four. I'm glad you liked it, and I'm sorry if I've dissapointed you over it being a chapter shorter than I initially said. I did attempt to publish this at the start of the week but I had to make some changes for it to meet the website's requirements.
12/7/24, 12:59 AM
Fuck, love this! Is Alex going to remain a microdicked twink, or is he going to experience some side effects that turns him into a muscle monster bigger than his brother with a tiny nub between his legs?
12/7/24, 12:34 AM
I’ve read this a few times and immensely enjoy it. The “almost” at the end, and the way his submission and pleasure escalates and nearly sways him - so good, and so hot. I look forward to reading more
12/6/24, 10:03 PM
Love the mindfucking, hope to see this continue!
12/6/24, 3:12 PM
Can you embed the images so that they are links within the story text? Do they have to be huge massive walls of text added? Or can the images actually be embedded into the story so that I don’t have to click on them to see them? I know in a previous chapter you had images embedded but not in this one for some reason. I also feel like a lot of the images didn’t add much. When the story described black dice with gold text, I pictured black dice with gold text. Clicking on the image link around that area of the story didn’t take me to some sexy picture that really turned me on; it took me to a picture of black dice with golden text, exactly the way I pictured. In that case, the linked image didn’t add anything or reveal anything I hadn’t already been thinking of. If you’d just described the dice without specifying the color, the picture would have added a bit more, but even then, I’d prefer to read “black dice with golden text” instead of reading a huge multi-line text link. Reading those huge links really takes me out of the flow of reading your story, and then clicking on them to see super generic images sometimes takes me out even further.

12/6/24, 3:46 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thankyou for the feedback, There is a limit to how many photos I can ha e on my profile to properly imbed I to stories, I have not yet figured out how to do this as I am relatively new and learning as I go, as for the dice, it was a foresight which I will remove, I will try to at least change the links in future stories to (click here) bundles so there aren't any large links. Thankyou again, happy reading :grinning:

12/6/24, 7:19 PM
@[Kink Author](/user/show/10050299) The quota of images is usually sufficient for 30 or more pictures. The site rescales and compresses images uploaded to store them most efficiently. With a monthly donation of $1/month your quota is increased to be able to hold the images for more stories than you could probably write :) And if you don't want to upload the images, you can also embed images stored somewhere else on the net, but you have to get a "pure" link to that image (directly to the .jpg file) and then you can paste that link into the image dialog.

12/6/24, 9:04 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Thankyou, I have considered making a donation, this is something I'll likely considered further If I decide to continue writing
Anonymous
12/6/24, 7:47 PM
I live to serve the virus!
12/6/24, 7:25 PM
Terrifying yet hot. Great start!
Anonymous
12/6/24, 7:15 PM
I love where this story is going! His conditioning to the word grunt! His physical enahncements! The threat of keeping him for far longer and making him think its voluntary!
12/6/24, 7:08 PM
Why do I get the feeling that their new quests are going to be completed together ;)
12/6/24, 2:50 AM
I'm really loving this series! Gradual transformations are high effort to write, but so rewarding to read. Great work. I really enjoy how Leon and Edward's transformations parallel each other.

12/6/24, 6:57 PM
@[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663) I'm so glad to hear you are enjoying it! This series has been so much fun to write, and I am hopeful the next few chapters will make the slow burn worth the wait.