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2/1/20, 5:12 AM
This is my favorite chapter of the House guest series, I hope to read more of these
Anonymous
2/1/20, 3:04 AM
very interested to see where this goes ! hope the next chapter comes soon !
Centuria
2/1/20, 2:45 AM
nice work, look forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous
2/1/20, 2:36 AM
Excellent. Your work gets me off every time.
2/1/20, 1:44 AM
Wow! I loved this story, love the concept. Keep it up.
2/1/20, 1:24 AM
It's a hard read because there are so many grammatical errors such as sentence fragments, etc. within the sentences. I'm happy that you continued the story, but you need to edit the work before you submit so readers can make it through your work without so much effort.
Anonymous
1/31/20, 11:01 PM
I really hope there's a backup of his mind stored somewhere. alternatively, having Alec find a note explaining everything when it's too late would make this feel like a kinky episode of the Twilight Zone or possibly Black Mirror.
firesix
1/31/20, 10:49 PM
Fuuuuuck. This is incredible. Your writing style and word choice is absolutely perfect. I couldn't write this well if I wrote for the next million years, and I'm a native speaker, so that's saying something. I really really hope for more, and I love this concept, this idea, and am so excited to see it continue. You're the best.
1/31/20, 10:28 PM
Martin, I really enjoyed this! Great job! That people feel something at the end is a credit to you as a writer. Can't wait to see where this goes.
1/31/20, 9:39 PM
really good story. Id love to collaborate with you on a story blufman1 on here email blufdude@aol.com