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boi98229
1/31/20, 3:57 AM
i love the combination of leather, mind control, domination, and erotic enslavement. For me this set of story elements is hot beyond words. My problem with the story so far is that without magic as an element, the conversation during which Tim lost all control and apparently his memory is way too short and has almost no real elements of hypnosis or any other mind control technique. There is clear indication that the Dominant's voice is mesmerizing and somehow causing Tim to feel a strong sense of pleasure. Granted Tim is apparently not happy with his having to work, or the work he is doing, which takes up so much of his time and energy. That might provide some rationale for Tim wanting to make a major change in his life. But for those readers (certainly including me) who enjoy the process of seduction, an insidiously increasing degree of mind control, a slow shift in power from the submissive to the Dominant, this part of the story is way too short. It was kind of a wham bam, thank you Ma'am kind of experience. What you did write was fine; it was what wasn't there that made the story less interesting for me than it could have been. I will say that I do have a strong pre-existing bias towards stories that provide context and character for what comes next. Others who read erotic stories just want to get to the sex without a lot of preamble. Neither preference is wrong.
Anonymous
1/31/20, 3:28 AM
Luv male musk. Hopefully this story can continue
LongtimeFan
1/31/20, 3:01 AM
Well helllOOOOOO. Amazing story, amazing mental transformation (I love it when they get stupid!), and best of all, amazing photos. That hunk in the orange...hoooooo boy. Always a pleasure!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
1/31/20, 1:38 AM
One of my biggest fantasies is to be pimped out by a Superior Man to serve Superior Men.
Bign54@gmail.com
1/31/20, 1:22 AM
so fucking good! thanks!****
Anonymous
1/31/20, 1:15 AM
wonderful
Anonymous
1/30/20, 10:15 PM
Awesome
1/30/20, 8:53 PM
Fun twist! I was just reading chapter three again last night, so glad to see it finished.
1/30/20, 8:44 PM
@JRZTT: CTF means cock transformation :) @Juan Bondjuvi: Yeah, I think that was I was aiming for, haha. It was late when I wrote the teaser, as it's always the last thing I do. Thanks. :D And thanks everyone. I'm glad you like it!
Anonymous
1/30/20, 7:45 PM
will we see more?