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1/29/20, 5:46 AM
I don't lose hope you will continue this ^ ^
blankbot
1/29/20, 3:32 AM
Your writing is SOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOTSOFUCKINGHOT. Thank you.
Anonymous
1/29/20, 2:05 AM
please keep writing. your stories keep me going!
1/29/20, 1:53 AM
Sex scenes usually don't get my interest. I rush through them or scan until they end. That said, wow, I hung onto every word of Aaron and Butch's sucking and then fucking scenes. I could smell the scent of Butch's hairy ass. So well written and hot! (I just wish Aaron had plunged his face into his uncle's hairy hole and made Butch love every damn lick)
1/29/20, 1:06 AM
Original both in idea and style.
1/29/20, 12:36 AM
Nice touch with the whole psych visit induction; plus it seems that Pine is helping Nick and the team with his inductions. I definitely like the positive vibe that comes with what Pine is doing. Looking forward to part 3.
1/29/20, 12:31 AM
Glad to see Pine and Mike back together in a another story; I really liked the last one. It's an interesting dynamic between these two characters, the bond of friendship intermingled with master-servant is very engaging. Looking forward to seeing what happens over the college arc.
1/29/20, 12:19 AM
Definitely liked the shifting between the normal world and the room as the means for bringing about the changes. Very nice touch in a very good story.
Anonymous
1/29/20, 12:12 AM
Hot as hell! Would have liked to have seen some accessories added (cologne, expensive watch). Still a super hot transformation though!
LongtimeFan
1/28/20, 11:42 PM
HOT DAMN! This was incredible! I love skater-to-prep transformations, largely because I find both types incredibly hot. I also loved the use of scent as the key factor in the hypnosis--you don't see much in the way of smells helping to brainwash people. Fantastic stuff!