Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/27/20, 12:20 PM
I appreciate imagining him in his sweaty, tight football uniform. Maybe next time a locker room with those beefcakes not wearing as much please?
Anonymous
1/27/20, 12:18 PM
Fantasy for me too! Hope the protagonist will enjoy a spurt muscle growth in spandex suit :)
Anonymous
1/27/20, 9:49 AM
More punishments please!
ForgottenCradle
1/27/20, 9:48 AM
it's good to see that others thought about the sheriff being controlled. thought about it since the first time he was mentioned and...I mean, it's still not off the table,right? this was just his introductary chapter
Anonymous
1/27/20, 8:42 AM
JAWhite Milker ia fucking great, anything he writes. He understands the connections among tatts, nicotine, hair, muscles and a badass attitude. Plus, he can write. Holy shit, Man can he write! He just doesn't write enough. i've been following him for yesrs. i love every one, but there just ain't enough be of them. MORE! MORE OFTEN! I'd pay good money for his shit. Why doesn't he publish on Kindle or Nook!
malskin
1/27/20, 7:37 AM
This story has got better and better and now with a more intense mind control even more so - really enjoyed this last chapter look forward seeing Butch being under more control
Anonymous
1/27/20, 2:41 AM
This site does not have enough foot kink stories. I'm glad that your stories are around for us foot fetishists. Maybe next time, you can write a story about guys who are flexible enough to masturbate themselves with their own feet. I've went out with guys who were able to do that, amd let me tell you, its really hot.
Plague
1/27/20, 2:33 AM
I have to say it's quite fascinating, watching a writer hone their craft and expand their abilities. You're getting better at character interaction and you're not leaning on the crutch of mind control as much. You are also better at making subtle differences like how Bill was more pessimistic than Steve.
Cigarjock18
1/27/20, 2:15 AM
Great chapter. What happened to the fourth member of the training group?
Sunflower
1/27/20, 1:13 AM
I agree with the previous comment. I was hoping the meds would make the Sheriff an obedient zombie. Missed opportunity.. I did enjoy seeing the mind control being used more frequently in this chapter tho. Keep up the good work!