Recent Comments

Plague
1/27/20, 2:33 AM
I have to say it's quite fascinating, watching a writer hone their craft and expand their abilities. You're getting better at character interaction and you're not leaning on the crutch of mind control as much. You are also better at making subtle differences like how Bill was more pessimistic than Steve.
Cigarjock18
1/27/20, 2:15 AM
Great chapter. What happened to the fourth member of the training group?
Sunflower
1/27/20, 1:13 AM
I agree with the previous comment. I was hoping the meds would make the Sheriff an obedient zombie. Missed opportunity.. I did enjoy seeing the mind control being used more frequently in this chapter tho. Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
1/26/20, 10:44 PM
Super Hot!! can not wait until i get a gay job like this.
Anonymous
1/26/20, 10:38 PM
Wow!
blankbot
1/26/20, 10:01 PM
This is one of the hottest, best-written stories that I've ever read on this site. MORE, PLEASE!
Singlet Slave
1/26/20, 9:20 PM
Please write more stories you are a great writer!
Red Eye
1/26/20, 9:13 PM
I could see where this actually works
1/26/20, 7:38 PM
I agree;I thik tha I speak for us all when I say that we're waiting for Bro with baited breath...
1/26/20, 7:37 PM
I agree;I thik tha I speak for us all when I say that we're waiting for Bro with baited breath...