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Anonymous
1/25/20, 9:49 AM
I hope the next story is about relationships in family.
Anonymous
1/25/20, 9:46 AM
I love your writing! More please '-'
Anonymous
1/25/20, 9:19 AM
can we see the bro next?
Anonymous
1/25/20, 9:13 AM
Spectacular!!!
Wp
1/25/20, 7:38 AM
Also, the way Dylan went from having to get told to tuck his shirt in/do his top button up (even after losing to Todd) to the below when Todd tells him of: 'He unbuckled it and unbuttoned his pants again so that he could place the tail of the shirt inside for the neatest tuck possible.' Is just amazing, in my opinion!
Wp
1/25/20, 7:16 AM
Loved this story, start middle and end! Filled with twists and turns. I think the ending worked, sometimes the bad guy wins (well at the moment anyway...let's see what happens in your next series!). I have a few questions, after being a fan of your work for a few years now (if I need to email you instead please let me know!). 1)you talk alot about the specifics of getting into 'uniform'- doing top buttons up, tucking shirts in and making sure they are tucked in nice as and smartly. I love these detail! I was wondering what draws you to this type of description and is this siemthibg you wish you saw more of in the real world? 2) how do you decide what uniform to use? I always love a nice pair of suit trousers with a nearly tucked in shirt and tight tie (similar to how all the office drones in yes sir dressed). Do you have specific favourites? 3) if you had to be someone within the story, who would you want to be? Love love love all of your work, you are an amazing story teller!
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1/25/20, 6:40 AM
you're a good writer, man. you clearly care about this story and thats what makes it hot and still a good read.
1/25/20, 5:37 AM
I did not actually make the connection you mentioned about body types while writing this, but I'm glad you've brought it up. Andreas being a baseball player was a plot element I decided on as I was in the process of writing this, and stuck with because I thought it worked well within the premise and gave the opportunity to bring in an athletic theme. And yes, when baseball came into it I would have been remiss not to go for the slang of pitching and catching being slang for topping and bottoming. I'll be sure to expand on this when I get around to writing a follow up, but before then I have plenty more to work on and release. Thank you for your interest in this premise!
1/25/20, 5:17 AM
I'm intrigued by the pitcher being asked by the Coach in the dream if he ever thought of being a catcher. Is this a play on words for possible top to bottom? Or is it something deeper? Andreas body type is clearly that of a catcher. Catchers are short, compact and muscular. Pitchers tend to be tall and lanky. Andreas finding out that he has always been in the wrong position could be interesting, be it baseball, relationships or sexually.
Anonymous
1/25/20, 4:55 AM
we want to see what happens with the new ring to the new guy! please please please please!!!