Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/23/20, 10:47 PM
Chilling - I feel sorry for Tyler - even if he WAS an ass.... Too bad for him....Don't piss off a magician/football player/gay man
Anonymous
1/23/20, 10:46 PM
this could be gooood, but i hope this doesn't turn out to evil characters
Anonymous
1/23/20, 10:34 PM
I hope Christian isn't the usual 'very evil' protagonist
Anonymous
1/23/20, 9:36 PM
this is easily my favourite now. please add up!!
Anonymous
1/23/20, 9:16 PM
oh this has a lot of potential. excellent start.
UchihaDEMS
1/23/20, 9:14 PM
Well, tho its true that the writing can improve a bit. It was reaaaaaaaaaally hot. Thanks and please, do continue <3
1/23/20, 8:08 PM
I really loved the story, up until that last section where Nick and Mikey decide to go work for the store. The tone and pacing of the story shifted too suddenly at that point, and the characterization of Dennis changed pretty drastically. But I was extremely turned on by the earlier sections and the way you show the escalation of the men in this town turning into spandex-clad twinks.
Anonymous
1/23/20, 7:42 PM
it would be nice to see Christian use his songs to the whole baseball team, including the coach
UchihaDEMS
1/23/20, 6:01 PM
Son long as I keep seeing big guys enslaved and feet, I am happy <3
1/23/20, 5:04 PM
Nah, this is just a one shot. But I might write about more wrestlers in the future.