Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/23/20, 3:03 PM
So hot! Will there be a sequel?
1/23/20, 2:47 PM
This has the perfect dynamic of detail and pacing that I like...
1/23/20, 2:45 PM
Oh wow, thanks so much for the nice comments everyone. Really glad you guys enjoyed it!
Anonymous
1/23/20, 1:25 PM
Hey Twan hope you feel better and while I cant wait for more, please take time to take care of yourself.
Anonymous
1/23/20, 12:31 PM
I wish it was this easy to get rid of body hair. I Nair myself every couple weeks & it gets to be a hassle.
Sexcrab
1/23/20, 7:41 AM
This year barely started and already has, surely, one of best stories of 2020. Or better, of this entire site.
Anonymous
1/23/20, 7:40 AM
I love the transformation of coach, I can only imagine what will happen to the rest of the team with coach on Rogan's side. Great addition to the story!
1/23/20, 7:25 AM
You are one of my favorite authors here MST, and I always get excited seeing your stories here on the site. I love your classic feet worship and body freeze combination. Keep up the great work!
1/23/20, 5:21 AM
Really nice story; I like the idea of Jeremy becoming a drone. We don't really see many stories where characters embrace the mind control; it's something that I want to try a capture. Your story is a big inspiration and a point of reference for trying to create stories like that. Thank you for writing this story.
Anonymous
1/23/20, 4:53 AM
I like the part where Charlie and Blake deepened each other's trance state more by staring at each other. It always turns me on when the victims in the story helps out in the demise of the other soon-to-slave hunks. The homoerotic wrestling was also a fun addition to the story. Great job!