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autodream
1/17/20, 2:32 PM
The story doesn't necessarily mean the end of ConnorXJesse. It could mean that an awkward partnership would potentially need to be formed to combat the overwhelming strength of the 3P's? Only time will tell... I think what happen with Jesse, is along with starting to enjoy, pleasure... He became additionally annoyed by how Connor tried to play both sides. The friend, and the hypnotist. He failed to be honest with Jesse, as compared to someone like Kevin who was very forward with what he wanted. I don't think I explored that, which probably would have happen before the 3P's, but Jesse would actually start to prefer people who were honest about their desire to fuck him.
SirD
1/17/20, 12:04 PM
love this series!!! i hope theres more to come.
Anonymous
1/17/20, 11:03 AM
I hope you have a lot of free time to write many story!
Anonymous
1/17/20, 8:19 AM
Would love to see more of this!
Alter
1/17/20, 6:31 AM
Great story keep up the hard work. Need to know what happens next and what plans Mr. Pollex has for Finn.
Anonymous
1/17/20, 6:15 AM
very well written and atmospheric.
Panos
1/17/20, 6:05 AM
Josmith, I love where this story is going, you are one my favorite authors. Please continue this great story!
Anonymous
1/17/20, 4:55 AM
Willie kept the spirit of the story going, using his own flair. I liked it!!
1/17/20, 4:44 AM
Perfect pace on the transformations. I loved how Andy and Clint transformed even with no details given of possible resistance and/or lustful acceptance. Just the result of the transformation against the short scene in the cafeteria was perfect, esp with Andy cutting his jeans. And many more chapters to go...thank you.
Max
1/17/20, 4:08 AM
it would be amazing if he actually got more items that the ring would force onto him, perhaps a necklace wich would control his mouth and neck movements, or make him say stuff he normally wouldn't say