Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/17/20, 8:19 AM
Would love to see more of this!
Alter
1/17/20, 6:31 AM
Great story keep up the hard work. Need to know what happens next and what plans Mr. Pollex has for Finn.
Anonymous
1/17/20, 6:15 AM
very well written and atmospheric.
Panos
1/17/20, 6:05 AM
Josmith, I love where this story is going, you are one my favorite authors. Please continue this great story!
Anonymous
1/17/20, 4:55 AM
Willie kept the spirit of the story going, using his own flair. I liked it!!
1/17/20, 4:44 AM
Perfect pace on the transformations. I loved how Andy and Clint transformed even with no details given of possible resistance and/or lustful acceptance. Just the result of the transformation against the short scene in the cafeteria was perfect, esp with Andy cutting his jeans. And many more chapters to go...thank you.
Max
1/17/20, 4:08 AM
it would be amazing if he actually got more items that the ring would force onto him, perhaps a necklace wich would control his mouth and neck movements, or make him say stuff he normally wouldn't say
Nik M
1/17/20, 2:21 AM
I disagree with those who are having issues with this story. I think irl a lot of straight guys do try to capitalize and tokenize gay culture, especially using apps like TikTok. I think it is hot to see them being used and transformed like in your story. I think if like this becomes a series and much later on you want a twist, it would be hot to see Jerimiah become a dumb tik tok slut too, but not until much later on and the others have all been transformed and used in various ways. The writing is also great. And the story is hot. I think it is great that you are confronting problematic issues in our culture in a fun and hot way. You definitely do not sound like an incel and I think that some people are just trying to troll you or stir drama, but you should keep writing how and what you want! :)
1/17/20, 12:45 AM
Looking forward to the next challenge to befall our Tommy! I feel this chapter was totally a golden shower scene but with a wee change, as it were. Very clever :)
Anonymous
1/17/20, 12:37 AM
I absolutely loved this😋 be awesome to see him trying to get used to his new body