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1/17/20, 4:44 AM
Perfect pace on the transformations. I loved how Andy and Clint transformed even with no details given of possible resistance and/or lustful acceptance. Just the result of the transformation against the short scene in the cafeteria was perfect, esp with Andy cutting his jeans. And many more chapters to go...thank you.
Max
1/17/20, 4:08 AM
it would be amazing if he actually got more items that the ring would force onto him, perhaps a necklace wich would control his mouth and neck movements, or make him say stuff he normally wouldn't say
Nik M
1/17/20, 2:21 AM
I disagree with those who are having issues with this story. I think irl a lot of straight guys do try to capitalize and tokenize gay culture, especially using apps like TikTok. I think it is hot to see them being used and transformed like in your story. I think if like this becomes a series and much later on you want a twist, it would be hot to see Jerimiah become a dumb tik tok slut too, but not until much later on and the others have all been transformed and used in various ways. The writing is also great. And the story is hot. I think it is great that you are confronting problematic issues in our culture in a fun and hot way. You definitely do not sound like an incel and I think that some people are just trying to troll you or stir drama, but you should keep writing how and what you want! :)
1/17/20, 12:45 AM
Looking forward to the next challenge to befall our Tommy! I feel this chapter was totally a golden shower scene but with a wee change, as it were. Very clever :)
Anonymous
1/17/20, 12:37 AM
I absolutely loved this😋 be awesome to see him trying to get used to his new body
1/17/20, 12:11 AM
Thanks all for the lovely comments :) @LongtimeFan thanks for the feedback! Will there be a sequel? Maybe, if I can straighten out some of the backstory. No promises yet. @S. Q. Neemie I'm sure there's plenty of room in this town (though not in Phalanx, Minnesota) for another magic ring store! The magic transforming store has been done before - I was reminded of a series that abracadabra wrote. https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/jockhole-transformations/jockhole-transformations-1
1/17/20, 12:02 AM
Well how very interesting, and sexy. First, welcome back. Second, I always loved the Island and its cool to see it again. Now, that said, I do have to admit I hoped Connor was involved as I like the way he interacted with Jesse. That said the two becoming good boys together is very hot. So yeah, sexy stuff!
1/17/20, 12:02 AM
This is excellent . You do a great job at building the tension and keeping the character real even as he pitches over the edge of sexytimes. I've wanted to do a series about a magic ring shop that forces dudes into gay situations, and now I feel like I've been beaten to the punch (so to speak). Well done.
1/16/20, 9:04 PM
So good. So very promising. Surely there will be a sequel?
Anonymous
1/16/20, 8:22 PM
Unless something is going to happen in future chapters I'm not aware of, I'm not sure where you're getting that this is furry. Seems to just be straight up bestiality. Which if that's your thing, hey, explore it in a safe place like this, I guess. But there is a world of difference between that and furry, and I don't think equating the two is a good idea.