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Anonymous
1/17/20, 12:37 AM
I absolutely loved this😋 be awesome to see him trying to get used to his new body
1/17/20, 12:11 AM
Thanks all for the lovely comments :) @LongtimeFan thanks for the feedback! Will there be a sequel? Maybe, if I can straighten out some of the backstory. No promises yet. @S. Q. Neemie I'm sure there's plenty of room in this town (though not in Phalanx, Minnesota) for another magic ring store! The magic transforming store has been done before - I was reminded of a series that abracadabra wrote. https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/jockhole-transformations/jockhole-transformations-1
1/17/20, 12:02 AM
Well how very interesting, and sexy. First, welcome back. Second, I always loved the Island and its cool to see it again. Now, that said, I do have to admit I hoped Connor was involved as I like the way he interacted with Jesse. That said the two becoming good boys together is very hot. So yeah, sexy stuff!
1/17/20, 12:02 AM
This is excellent . You do a great job at building the tension and keeping the character real even as he pitches over the edge of sexytimes. I've wanted to do a series about a magic ring shop that forces dudes into gay situations, and now I feel like I've been beaten to the punch (so to speak). Well done.
1/16/20, 9:04 PM
So good. So very promising. Surely there will be a sequel?
Anonymous
1/16/20, 8:22 PM
Unless something is going to happen in future chapters I'm not aware of, I'm not sure where you're getting that this is furry. Seems to just be straight up bestiality. Which if that's your thing, hey, explore it in a safe place like this, I guess. But there is a world of difference between that and furry, and I don't think equating the two is a good idea.
Anonymous
1/16/20, 7:20 PM
Excellent addition thanks!
Anonymous
1/16/20, 3:33 PM
That was incredible. I read it twice. I'm still hard!!!!!
Anonymous
1/16/20, 3:20 PM
Great story! Great series!!! Loved it. Loved the way the boys were so under control.
autodream
1/16/20, 2:47 PM
I messaged you Martin, thanks!! And yes, eye contact is very important. Especially in hypnosis... Or trying to make people feel bad while you accept a blow job from them ;) hahaha!!