Recent Comments

Autodream
1/15/20, 11:26 PM
Most times I write a story, I usually reset Jese's resistance and sexuality scale. The island chapters are meant to follow him through multiple encounters, but are seperate canon from other random stories. I imagine it as, younger me experiencing hypnosis and gay for the first time in different scenarios. I do first person because of the hypnosis. I feel like it allows me to cheat in what is going through Jese's mind. I roleplay in 3rd, Jese in first.
1/15/20, 10:32 PM
@joaopomilio: Not sure if there are a lot of cowboys left in Austin, but that's an interesting idea.
1/15/20, 10:30 PM
@David S, I'm currently working on a story based on ideas from this chapter. I hope it will help alienkiller and other aspiring writers see one possible model for how they can expand their plot ideas into a fully fledged compelling story.
1/15/20, 8:23 PM
love to chat to u about your stories blufdude@aol.com
Anonymous
1/15/20, 7:15 PM
Missing a chance for a lot of erotic details. Case in point, just using the last paragraph: "Then a duplicate formed of the boy"...That ONE sentence could be fully expanded into a chapter on its own, or at least a couple of hot paragraphs. You have a decent foundation for a story, as they say the devil is in the details...you need to expand the picture.
Anonymous
1/15/20, 5:59 PM
очень понравился,хочу новые рассказы
dm300charmed
1/15/20, 4:46 PM
From UK Love this! please continue.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
1/15/20, 3:43 PM
also I hope you do a new Magazine Sex Diary? this time in Austin, Texas, with a Cowboy?
EatingMenFaeces
1/15/20, 3:37 PM
Hot stories! Wish there could be more
1/15/20, 3:11 PM
The most fun part bout this yarn was the punchline...hilarious! I also enjoyed the slow build effect