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1/16/20, 2:48 AM
Definitely like the work, converting the police is something that I like to see.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
1/16/20, 2:38 AM
I just said Austin because it was the first city in Texas that came to my mind
Martin
1/15/20, 11:55 PM
Hey Autodream, I just realized that your story is split over two author accounts (autodream and iautodream) and that there are many parts of your "The Island" story line - don't you want to put them all into one series? And if you want me to join your accounts into one, I'd also do that for you. Just let me know at martin@gayspiralstories.com
Autodream
1/15/20, 11:26 PM
Most times I write a story, I usually reset Jese's resistance and sexuality scale. The island chapters are meant to follow him through multiple encounters, but are seperate canon from other random stories. I imagine it as, younger me experiencing hypnosis and gay for the first time in different scenarios. I do first person because of the hypnosis. I feel like it allows me to cheat in what is going through Jese's mind. I roleplay in 3rd, Jese in first.
1/15/20, 10:32 PM
@joaopomilio: Not sure if there are a lot of cowboys left in Austin, but that's an interesting idea.
1/15/20, 10:30 PM
@David S, I'm currently working on a story based on ideas from this chapter. I hope it will help alienkiller and other aspiring writers see one possible model for how they can expand their plot ideas into a fully fledged compelling story.
1/15/20, 8:23 PM
love to chat to u about your stories blufdude@aol.com
Anonymous
1/15/20, 7:15 PM
Missing a chance for a lot of erotic details. Case in point, just using the last paragraph: "Then a duplicate formed of the boy"...That ONE sentence could be fully expanded into a chapter on its own, or at least a couple of hot paragraphs. You have a decent foundation for a story, as they say the devil is in the details...you need to expand the picture.
Anonymous
1/15/20, 5:59 PM
очень понравился,хочу новые рассказы
dm300charmed
1/15/20, 4:46 PM
From UK Love this! please continue.