Recent Comments

1/15/20, 12:32 PM
This story is full of good erotic ideas, but the way they're told just sucks the life right out of them. It feels like I'm reading a set of instructions for how to assemble a bookshelf.
SHITTY
1/15/20, 12:09 PM
I would like to eat stinking shit from THOSE GUARDS and ENRIQUE
MASTERs
1/15/20, 12:08 PM
Fucking hot, cummed twice over your story!
ForgottenCradle
1/15/20, 8:59 AM
as a big fan of real-life 'Jerry' I totally support this pairing i really love the not-so-subtle nods at their real life counterparts. i hope you continue with this series
Anonymous
1/15/20, 8:09 AM
I really liked this story. Of course it was really sexy, a lot of the kinks were great. Fem Bears, public sex, release of inhibitions are all great imo. The writing was good and flowed well. But it was also sweet and went in a nice direction. A lot of bear tf stories are about humiliation and degradation and end up with the TF'ed in an essentially miserable existence. Which gets old pretty quickly. You took it somewhere nice. Where burdens were lifted, happiness was found, hot sex happened, and he was still bear-ish. Didn't feel gross after masturbating to it. Thank you.
1/15/20, 7:46 AM
Well-balanced; very succinctly paced.
Mindwinder
1/15/20, 7:33 AM
So, does the Island take place after all the other times Jese's been hypnotized, or is it its own thing? Love your writing btw--and I'm not usually a fan of first person so I hope that says something haha
Anonymous
1/15/20, 6:57 AM
I love that this is both comedic and hot at the same time. Nice change of pace from the sexual dramas that I think are more standard for the genre. Would love to see this continued!
Anonymous
1/15/20, 4:06 AM
Every Hypnothrill story has the same effect on me. thanks for this, quite enjoyed it.
Anonymous
1/15/20, 3:31 AM
Good follow-up. Now, what happened that made them 'subjects of the Crown?'