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screamingmoist
1/13/20, 7:05 PM
thanks! this one was pretty heavily inspired by the old Clark Ashton Smith story, "The Garden of [Adompha." ](http://www.eldritchdark.com/writings/short-stories/76/the-garden-of-adompha)
1/13/20, 6:45 PM
Nope, not the end. Just me writing when I feel inspiration. If you look at the time between previous chapters, you'll see there is a lot of time that can happen.
Anonymous
1/13/20, 4:59 PM
Incredibly writing! I read all of your work, and this is one of the best.
Anonymous
1/13/20, 3:53 PM
I must be a prude. Who gets off on feces?
Musicmantx8
1/13/20, 3:37 PM
Please keep writing this story! already turned on and intrigued
Boston Satyr
1/13/20, 3:19 PM
i want see what happens when Tim encounters other hikers. or muscular park ranger w/ a moustache and spit n' polish uniform. will he succumb too, or is he in on the magic of the stream? does the steam create only otters? what about bears & wolves?
Anonymous
1/13/20, 3:05 PM
Mr Twan Andersen sir we need these stories! This was the hottest one on here in a while. . . Daddy's, musk, and a good boy submitting... it was perfect! You have an obligation ! ! ! Hahaha I'm only teasing, but frig. . . These are so hot. Can't wait for the next one.
Anonymous
1/13/20, 2:24 PM
was your house on fire while you were writing this? were you in a hurry to get out before the place burned down? it seems so, you rushed the story, you didn't let the story tell itself. slow down and allow the story to develop and mature. that being said, good premise.
kurbydog
1/13/20, 1:19 PM
great read, love to be there with Butch and Aaron! give Butch my hole to fuck.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
1/13/20, 12:36 PM
I wish to see how the ring would work in a crowd like a cowboy convention, the nicer as big gay cowboys and the nasty and homophobic ons as bottom cowbois