Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/13/20, 11:42 PM
FUCK. YES.
David S
1/13/20, 11:41 PM
I love alien abduction stories! I hope you write Phase 2! And thank you for contributing your story, I live for this stuff...
1/13/20, 10:15 PM
Loved it. Gave me a Hellraiser vibe in the beginning. A great "Be careful what you wish for" story.
Anonymous
1/13/20, 8:41 PM
The comment above made me laugh. It's totally correct. Slooooow it down. The sexy parts are in the details. Folks (mostly) reading these stories are reading to be turned on. What do Danny and Evan look like? Why are they wearing rubber and what does it have to do with aliens? Tentacles, so much could be done with those, as restraints or mouth mufflers or orifice probes. This feels like a first draft and needs more fleshing out. Good luck, alienkiller. Keep at it!!
Mike P
1/13/20, 8:33 PM
I agree with the 1st comment. Good story idea, although been done a lot. The reader seems to be rushed through the story. I felt out of breath after reading it because it was going so quickly. Take your time and savor the scene and take the pace from sprint to slow and steady marathon.
BankStreet
1/13/20, 7:45 PM
A favorite I return to again and again. Would really like to see another chapter.
screamingmoist
1/13/20, 7:05 PM
thanks! this one was pretty heavily inspired by the old Clark Ashton Smith story, "The Garden of [Adompha." ](http://www.eldritchdark.com/writings/short-stories/76/the-garden-of-adompha)
1/13/20, 6:45 PM
Nope, not the end. Just me writing when I feel inspiration. If you look at the time between previous chapters, you'll see there is a lot of time that can happen.
Anonymous
1/13/20, 4:59 PM
Incredibly writing! I read all of your work, and this is one of the best.
Anonymous
1/13/20, 3:53 PM
I must be a prude. Who gets off on feces?