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1/13/20, 10:28 AM
Great story!
Anonymous
1/13/20, 10:17 AM
loved every word of it
Anonymous
1/13/20, 7:43 AM
more please
Anonymous
1/13/20, 6:34 AM
very sexy take on the various techniques series. loved it and hope there lots more cumming :)
LongtimeFan
1/13/20, 5:31 AM
Incredible! Your writing is so poetic and evocative--I could see the whole story in my mind's eye. But it's also terrifying; your descriptions of a sentient plant race slowly absorbing the world...brrr. Brilliant stuff!
1/13/20, 4:58 AM
Sure, just let me know where you posted it.
ScottishPig
1/13/20, 3:46 AM
Fun idea! Reminded me of mastershit88's stories, especially The 12 - which I'm sure you're familiar with!
Boston Satyr
1/13/20, 3:35 AM
more, please!! eager to see where this goes.
1/13/20, 12:42 AM
I was constrained somewhat in the writing of this (I'm sure eagle-eyed readers will quickly figure out what I mean) but nevertheless, it would be good to understand more specifically how I could make this story better! Thanks for reading!
1/13/20, 12:36 AM
I think the way Jeremiah and Hunter's personalities came across is done well! I think the fact that people are having strong reactions to those characters is testament to the author's writing. Looking forward to a second chapter! It does feel like Jeremiah will be getting comeuppance at some point but who knows? :)