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Apr 18, 2021
12/4/24, 1:00 AM
Great story!
hauntedestheart
12/4/24, 12:02 AM
Glad to see this story is being continued, I found the first chapter very intriguing
12/3/24, 11:49 PM
Welp, we now have the ticking timebomb of the Werewolf King descending on the territory to sort this mess out. Barb is a witch? Wonders will never cease. As much as I love Alpha Pete, I have to admit Alpha Toddson has a point, he's been very laid-back as an Alpha, and maybe some more decisive action would've cut Braithwaite's meddling short. Hard to get a gauge on how Zach is doing... he's still in his transition state... Hard to tell if Toddson's started to play his mind games with the pup.
12/3/24, 11:39 PM
Oh, two main reasons! I imagine the house is stuck in roughly that time period and also I thought the steady build of the song matched the sexual tension building between the characters.
Mind bender
12/3/24, 11:37 PM
Finally it happened, the orgy! I was not expecting the 18 year old and his dad. This was great!
Anonymous
12/3/24, 9:14 PM
What a MESS! Another great turn of this tale!
12/3/24, 7:20 PM
this story is fantastic! hope you continue it, would love to hear what other mischief these boys get into
Anon
12/3/24, 6:57 PM
Also if Ray is Catholic, he's likely celibate as of now. If he is him becoming a werewolf will be an interesting thing for him to navigate werewolf needs for intimacy with his existing role.
yeah
12/3/24, 6:53 PM
So hot. Would love to see chapter 3
Anon
12/3/24, 6:22 PM
Ah...it's good to know Yousef is away from...the entire mess currently unfolding elsewhere. And then there's that priest Ray...wonder how that's going to go. There's a sinister hint in how Yousef isn't going to let him go...but also there's the tragic element in that it's likely at the rate this is going Ray will probably get found out by somebody else- if he was acting like this in the prison the other's probably noticed- he's likely on somebody's radar. Yousef is...probably the best person he can run into in light of this- as he like Ray takes his faith seriously. At the same time, getting involved with the pack's...mess is going to be a thing there too. I hope he can keep his ability to stay with a church in some form- his faith clearly is important to him. In a way, the two are mirrors to each other. On the other hand, Yousef does have his loyalties to the pack, so it makes sense why he's scouting Ray out to be a new werewolf. It's dubious to a degree- but understandable. Larry learning about his family was a tragic moment, but it's clear he wants to protect him. That he is so happy with Todd is a wonderful thing...but I think that the fact his family will forever wonder if they hurt him or the like will always be the tragic part of all of this, even if Larry doesn't think that. As he puts it, getting involved with Luna has it's price. Meanwhile we have Toddson and Pete scheming...and the fact Toddson genuinely thinks the younger Bush was a wonderful alpha is...a thing. Considering that man was a bit of a disaster as a president, and Toddson is kind of a disaster of an alpha...it tracks I suppose. I cannot believe the plan seems to be turning into "let's kill the FBI agent and get away with it". I mean...actually I do understand why but that probably is just going to make everything worse and suspicion will naturally fall onto them again. And then there's that latino werewolf who seems...to be a big deal. Wonder what's up there. And Zach meanwhile is currently having the time of his life...is he even cognizant enough to realize his cousins are dead or just completely out of it? As much as I really don't want the FBI agent to well...actually win- I kind of do want the alphas to stop being so blatantly reckless. Because they really don't seem to have any plan beyond reacting to things sometimes. At the same time, I can't even blame the FBI agent for what he's doing- the wolves as a whole from an outside perspective have all the makings of a creepy cult with concerning use of sex. Though I kind of don't want him dead either. And there's that half-moon aspect in all of this. It is interesting that Yousef seeks to mark not only the church but his own property with his scent. He clearly is laying claim...but to what end? And how will the dynamic between Ray and Yousef progress?