Recent Comments

1/11/20, 5:06 PM
incredibly well written. Some of the turns of phrase are just perfect. I got off to this last night, and i woke up horny for more.
Jan 11, 2020
1/11/20, 4:59 PM
One of the more interesting aspects of the narrative is the differences between what 25 thinks that it's doing/remembers having done and what Moser describes (nippleplay, for example)...subtle but amusing.
dogdaes@yahoo.com
1/11/20, 4:57 PM
One of my fantasies, to be secretly taken at a bar or coffee shop to obey and mindlessly follow
1/11/20, 4:33 PM
lush in details and a wonderful excercise in world-building!
Jan 11, 2020
tomozco
1/11/20, 4:25 PM
Thanks Willie! You're one of my favourite authors on here too, along with Hypnothrill! So it's humbling to see your kind words and support. Thanks! :D
Anonymous
1/11/20, 4:24 PM
of all of the chapters, this one is my favorite and is the best wanking material
Jan 11, 2020
Willie Cici
1/11/20, 3:48 PM
Great story! I loved the plot twists. I suspected Jason was involved somehow when Rafael ended up on his knees, but the 'Professor' angle, I did not expect. Keep writing. You have at least two fans, myself and Hyp!
Jan 11, 2020
Anonymous
1/11/20, 3:37 PM
I love these stories. My only critique would be what I say to all the novice writers: writing means editing. Run SpellCheck/GrammarCheck on your word processor. It will catch so many errors and improve the syntax, while still keeping the natural speaking tone of your characters. Try it! It can't hurt.
Jan 11, 2020
tomozco
1/11/20, 2:44 PM
Thanks for your comment, Hypnothrill! I'm a big fan of your work as well! Like I mentioned, this was just a short one that I put together quickly, hence I didn't think much into the details of the setup or characters... just focused on the key action.
Anonymous
1/11/20, 2:32 PM
Please, do continue. I quite enjoy this diary-styled storytelling.