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Anon
12/3/24, 6:57 PM
Also if Ray is Catholic, he's likely celibate as of now. If he is him becoming a werewolf will be an interesting thing for him to navigate werewolf needs for intimacy with his existing role.
yeah
12/3/24, 6:53 PM
So hot. Would love to see chapter 3
Anon
12/3/24, 6:22 PM
Ah...it's good to know Yousef is away from...the entire mess currently unfolding elsewhere. And then there's that priest Ray...wonder how that's going to go. There's a sinister hint in how Yousef isn't going to let him go...but also there's the tragic element in that it's likely at the rate this is going Ray will probably get found out by somebody else- if he was acting like this in the prison the other's probably noticed- he's likely on somebody's radar. Yousef is...probably the best person he can run into in light of this- as he like Ray takes his faith seriously. At the same time, getting involved with the pack's...mess is going to be a thing there too. I hope he can keep his ability to stay with a church in some form- his faith clearly is important to him. In a way, the two are mirrors to each other. On the other hand, Yousef does have his loyalties to the pack, so it makes sense why he's scouting Ray out to be a new werewolf. It's dubious to a degree- but understandable. Larry learning about his family was a tragic moment, but it's clear he wants to protect him. That he is so happy with Todd is a wonderful thing...but I think that the fact his family will forever wonder if they hurt him or the like will always be the tragic part of all of this, even if Larry doesn't think that. As he puts it, getting involved with Luna has it's price. Meanwhile we have Toddson and Pete scheming...and the fact Toddson genuinely thinks the younger Bush was a wonderful alpha is...a thing. Considering that man was a bit of a disaster as a president, and Toddson is kind of a disaster of an alpha...it tracks I suppose. I cannot believe the plan seems to be turning into "let's kill the FBI agent and get away with it". I mean...actually I do understand why but that probably is just going to make everything worse and suspicion will naturally fall onto them again. And then there's that latino werewolf who seems...to be a big deal. Wonder what's up there. And Zach meanwhile is currently having the time of his life...is he even cognizant enough to realize his cousins are dead or just completely out of it? As much as I really don't want the FBI agent to well...actually win- I kind of do want the alphas to stop being so blatantly reckless. Because they really don't seem to have any plan beyond reacting to things sometimes. At the same time, I can't even blame the FBI agent for what he's doing- the wolves as a whole from an outside perspective have all the makings of a creepy cult with concerning use of sex. Though I kind of don't want him dead either. And there's that half-moon aspect in all of this. It is interesting that Yousef seeks to mark not only the church but his own property with his scent. He clearly is laying claim...but to what end? And how will the dynamic between Ray and Yousef progress?
12/3/24, 2:52 PM
Oh, to be a woman in this universe. Wife: Honey, i don't think you can trust this very suspicious man. Husband: You worry too much, he's my bro. Bros are just like that. *Giant Naked Man Walks in* Wolfman: You ready for a lifechanging event? You'll be a completely new man after you try this sauna. Wife: I really don't think you should go with him. Husband: Its just a bath, there's nothing to worry about. Wolfman *jerking off in front of them*: Going to turn you into a beast of a man. Husband: Ha, bros. *Five minutes later, completely transformed and naked husband walks back in* Husband: So, you know how you said i couldn't trust him? Funny story about that...

Pcm
12/3/24, 3:30 PM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) Husband: By the way, my bro whom I now look like is gonna name our son. You don't have a say in it. I will now allow him to grope you with my permission. Go bro! Wife: WTF Husband: I also fuck my people to make them my new Wolf bros.

12/3/24, 5:25 PM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) Some minor spoilers, but as the co-worker, well, let just say Gerald's wife I have a shot at Heinrich for that
A very interested reader
12/3/24, 5:12 PM
This story is going sooo well! I’m truly hooked
12/3/24, 3:36 PM
Good chapter! Can't wait to see how it goes next.
12/3/24, 2:41 PM
Spectacular!!

Pcm
12/3/24, 3:28 PM
@[Dan25](/user/show/10053172) Thanks
12/3/24, 1:58 PM
Definitely a hot and fun read! I felt Tim's corruption was a bit quick for just being overwhelmed with lust, but I get from a story pacing perspective why you'd have it that way. If you continue with more chapters, it'd be interesting to see Tim wrestle with his morality whenever he's away from Weston long enough. Either way, hope you continue!
12/1/24, 8:24 PM
PLEASE continue this story or write more in this world! Questions: What does happen when the key is removed? Can others be infected? What does happen when wrecked/disassembled/ other parts replaced? Does replaced parts affect the human condition or form?

12/3/24, 2:34 AM
@[Jakkin Larethian](/user/show/10035525) I have a next chapter in my head. I just need to sit down and do it. Keys removed: Were-car is stuck unconscious, (unable to start themselves) until the keys are returned. Can others be infected: Not that we know of, it seems to be genetic. Wrecked: likely not survive (sorry to be grim). It would take a monumental effort to restore a wrecked or partially wrecked were-car to a condition where they can start themselves again, and even moreso to transform back into human form. Replaced parts: the same magic that transfers their biological organs and body into car parts also works in reverse. Usefully, this means replacing parts in a were-car can actually mend or improve the were-car’s biological health. It’s not unusual for were-cars — who trust their mechanics — to avoid expensive medical bills by getting treated as cars instead of people, then remaining as cars for a few days/weeks/months until their fit enough to TF back. The next chapter I would write goes into some detail about this. Thank you for the comment.

12/3/24, 11:21 AM
@[The Dirty Spiders](/user/show/571676) I'm a great fan of inanimate TFs, too. A suggestion for a little tweak to the replacement lore..... Replacement parts start out as 'inert' and have to be assimilated, during which time the were-car is unable to resume their human form. Oil changes are quick, since the oil is stirred, circulated and spread thinly on 'live' surfaces, so Moses was able to change back after being driven home. Replacement parts would need more time, perhaps a whole weekend for a wiper blade. So... Eric's tyres have worn down until they are only just street-legal. He has to plan a week's vacation to get them changed, and has a new battery at the same time.

12/3/24, 12:28 PM
@[kb57z](/user/show/1950995) To be honest, you’ve almost perfectly hit the nail on the head. I was being vague because if I do write a part II, it will go into this, but yes. Smaller jobs get assimilated faster. Bigger replacement jobs are akin to a person recovering from surgery; They can only transform once they’re well enough and the replaced parts have been assimilated. Although tires are not a big deal (not a week anyways, maybe 25 minute or an hour); were cars will regrow their tire threading naturally while in human form, and should they be in car form long enough to need a tire change, it’s no more upsetting than a perhaps “slightly uncomfortable” nail clipping, or aggressive foot exfoliation.
12/3/24, 10:35 AM
we are in for a great start