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Brock
1/9/20, 7:46 AM
I literally just read all of these, if you stop writing, we will find you Hypnothrill hahahaha, no nut seriously these where amazing were do we sign up for the program?
Anonymous
1/9/20, 7:33 AM
^ To whoever is in charge of this site, is the above posting allowed? I thought I read somewhere linking things to other sites is not allowed.
Anonymous
1/9/20, 7:02 AM
I've never commented before, but I just wanted to say this was a great story and, Hypnothrill, you definitely have some loyal fans still reading!
Anonymous
1/9/20, 6:56 AM
im a big fan of your writing. you know how to make it hot 🤩
1/9/20, 6:23 AM
Fuckin hot. Now i gotta go read everything you ever wrote.
Buteo
1/9/20, 6:17 AM
Yeah, I think its worth a part two.
1/9/20, 6:02 AM
All right, dudes--its your playground now. Enjoy!
Anonymous
1/9/20, 3:52 AM
great start! looking forward to more - how many chapters will there be?
StevenCS
1/9/20, 2:55 AM
A masterful addition to one of my first and still favorite stories. Your work is excellent, as always, and am glad to see every post you make.
1/9/20, 2:51 AM
Another great story, Hypnothrill, and an excellent expansion on one of the classics. I always look forward to seeing what you've come up with. The single sour note in this chapter, to me, is in the sentence: "Still, it is up to the slavers to decide whether we can stay together; it is not a slave’s place to ask for such things." The use of the word "slavers" felt off. If, after they graduate, the various slaves are being sold off, I would have expected "masters" there as, to me, "slavers" implies those who are capturing slaves, not just owning them. That said, though, it was a very hot finale that leaves one wanting to see what else is happening on that campus.