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Anonymous
1/9/20, 3:52 AM
great start! looking forward to more - how many chapters will there be?
StevenCS
1/9/20, 2:55 AM
A masterful addition to one of my first and still favorite stories. Your work is excellent, as always, and am glad to see every post you make.
1/9/20, 2:51 AM
Another great story, Hypnothrill, and an excellent expansion on one of the classics. I always look forward to seeing what you've come up with. The single sour note in this chapter, to me, is in the sentence: "Still, it is up to the slavers to decide whether we can stay together; it is not a slave’s place to ask for such things." The use of the word "slavers" felt off. If, after they graduate, the various slaves are being sold off, I would have expected "masters" there as, to me, "slavers" implies those who are capturing slaves, not just owning them. That said, though, it was a very hot finale that leaves one wanting to see what else is happening on that campus.
Anonymous
1/9/20, 2:22 AM
I need more!
1/9/20, 1:20 AM
Thanks, Mreyes! (Boy, what I wouldn't give for another chapter of "Little Friends"....)
Mreyes
1/9/20, 1:15 AM
You are by far one of the most talented writers on this site. I love reading your material
1/9/20, 12:48 AM
I echo Cigarboy Cody's sentiments....who is the Master? I woll be imagining the Frat's adventures in mindscaping tonight as I lay in bed...Thank you!!!
1/9/20, 12:29 AM
I agree with absman 420 (whose name I adore, BTW); Ho9wever, I'm looking forward to the probable payoff, next chapter...
1/9/20, 12:19 AM
Ifeel myself seething with anticipation...sooo ,loving this.
1/9/20, 12:10 AM
I'm in love with this narrative pattern! I especially love the shifts in the narrator's thought patterns, tenses, syntax, etc. This gymnastically-arranged slow burn is giving me warm fuzzies and tinglies in my nethers....