Recent Comments

corinthian
1/8/20, 3:01 PM
Nicely done - thanks! Lots of opportunities here....
Anonymous
1/8/20, 2:09 PM
is the next part ready?
Anonymous
1/8/20, 1:36 PM
Will there be another chapter? Please continue!
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
1/8/20, 1:09 PM
Wish that was me in Hunter's position.
1/8/20, 1:06 PM
Boy, if there's ever a story that needs a "hypnotist gets ensared by his own hypnotic program" twist, it's this one. What would make this really hot is if sanctimonious Jeremiah got exposed to his own subliminals and turned into the sort of dumb, exhibitionist TikTok boy he despises. Maybe in the sequel?
Your soldier
1/8/20, 11:35 AM
great chapter i cannot wait for more!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 7:04 AM
i think you did a great job swizz! write for yourself not other people. there are always going to be differing opinions but if you are happy with it you will have an audience dark or not. please continue your amazing contributions to the site!
fingrfethr
1/8/20, 6:31 AM
Thanks for finding a new angle and writing the characters so well. Bravo!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 5:10 AM
I think it just needed a bit more smut, this is after all a bad guy wins story.
Anonymous
1/8/20, 4:30 AM
I loved it. Your protoganist doesnt even realize he's changed. So hot!!!