Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/8/20, 5:10 AM
I think it just needed a bit more smut, this is after all a bad guy wins story.
Anonymous
1/8/20, 4:30 AM
I loved it. Your protoganist doesnt even realize he's changed. So hot!!!
jackson
1/8/20, 3:56 AM
so i started reading stories at the mcstoryarchive, and found that I actually got turned on more by the gay stories than the straight and lesbian ones. which led me here. and i jsut wanted to say that this story was exceptional in my opinion. thank you for sharing it.
Anonymous
1/8/20, 2:03 AM
More pleaseeee
1/7/20, 11:57 PM
Can't wait to see where this is goingl amused by the constant shifts between normal and tranced states, and how they're placed within the narrative.
1/7/20, 11:47 PM
I'm kind'a fond of a slower burn, but the elements of the story, thus far, are really engaging
1/7/20, 11:36 PM
I'm really getting into the subtlety of the indoctrination process; Master must really be skilled in the "art" of NLP. Another great start to your usual storycraft!
Ken
1/7/20, 7:09 PM
Pretty much LOVED the whole story, except for the ending. It had a lot of neat twists and turns. Can't always have a happy ending I suppose. With chapter 9 I HATED waiting for 10. Even though it ended up being the last chapter. It could've been lengthened into maybe 1 more chapter? A few more surprises? Possibly another chapter with a happy ending maybe??? Already dislike waiting for the new story line for the next story...with that teaser. Maybe, hopefully (?) correcting/punishing Todd and Dylan and saving Nathan and putting him and Joe together??? Hopefully?? Anyway, looking forward to your new story (and further stories??) But it WAS very interesting and intriguing.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 6:59 PM
Love your story
JerkinBeforeWork
1/7/20, 6:58 PM
One of my favorite stories for a nice jerk. Thanks dude!