Recent Comments

Ken
1/7/20, 7:09 PM
Pretty much LOVED the whole story, except for the ending. It had a lot of neat twists and turns. Can't always have a happy ending I suppose. With chapter 9 I HATED waiting for 10. Even though it ended up being the last chapter. It could've been lengthened into maybe 1 more chapter? A few more surprises? Possibly another chapter with a happy ending maybe??? Already dislike waiting for the new story line for the next story...with that teaser. Maybe, hopefully (?) correcting/punishing Todd and Dylan and saving Nathan and putting him and Joe together??? Hopefully?? Anyway, looking forward to your new story (and further stories??) But it WAS very interesting and intriguing.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 6:59 PM
Love your story
JerkinBeforeWork
1/7/20, 6:58 PM
One of my favorite stories for a nice jerk. Thanks dude!
Growinggeek@gmail.com
1/7/20, 6:37 PM
This was a great continuation, great job!
Growinggeek@gmail.com
1/7/20, 6:31 PM
I really liked it - I only wish it'd been longer! Can't wait for more
Anonymous
1/7/20, 6:28 PM
Is there going to be a time skip in the The Further Adventures of a Mind Controller? I'm also not sure how involved this cast is going to be there, but it'd be nice if we get to see this cast being a bit older and see how their enslavement has been over the years.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 4:28 PM
love it
Anonymous
1/7/20, 4:25 PM
WOW, amazing. Is this the end or will you continue?
Anonymous
1/7/20, 3:19 PM
Reading the comments has been as entertaining as reading the story!! Sheesh!! It's erotic fiction, boys and girls. Calm the fuck down!!!!
New Fan
1/7/20, 3:15 PM
Also, regarding the out of characterness with Todd, I did notice that as well, but didn't feel to point it out at all because I did get that you were kinda going with the absolute power corrupts angle. And to be honest, I did still see glimmers of Todd's sadistic side throughout the epilogue. (mainly the micropenis stuff that he did to the men of the school) so while he was neutered, so to speak, he still has the dominating trait the we loved about him from the start. I also think that part of the reason why people think Todd went "soft" at the end is because of how much the other p.o.v. characters revere him so much at the end and are seemingly content with their lives, which gives an illusion that Todd is lenient with his subjects be ause theyre all happy, instead of feeling oppressed. But thats the beauty of the ending of this series to me, the mind fuck that Todd did to the student body completely eliminated their will to resist.