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Anonymous
1/7/20, 1:34 PM
they deleted your Tumblr again, how will we see the ending of next part?
Anonymous
1/7/20, 1:21 PM
Can't wait to hear more
Veteran
1/7/20, 1:08 PM
I believe that people expecting a "Good guys win" ending is because the story is not great as a wanking material. People usually do not bother the "Evil guys win" if the story is a pure porn story. This, however, is full of plots and suspenses, that makes others to treat this a fiction. In case of a fiction, most people would want to read something that "Good guys win" as they immerse themselves as the main character. When you are the main character, you usually do not want yourself to lose. Don't get me wrong, this story is quite beautifully written. Thanks the author for posting such a wonderful material for people to discuss on this site. I have long not seen such a large amount of comments that are not criticizing the moral standards or the political views. You have done a very excellent job. It just makes me wonder if the sequel will be more of a "Good guys win" situation.
BillionaireSociety
1/7/20, 1:08 PM
i would love to have a "where are they now" tour of each slave's brain to see how if the mode of compliance has changed. for instance, what fun way did joey get enslaved by nathan? still with the chess board?
Lafo
1/7/20, 12:27 PM
The story in itself is great, undoubtedly. But, how to say it... - as a wanking material, it is sketchy and has a lot of unrealized potential. For example, I really miss an explicit and full of humiliation Todd/Dylan scene.
screamingmoist
1/7/20, 12:18 PM
@RazzTFs - thanks so much! Pacing is always a pain. I usually end up cutting out a ton.
May 10, 2019
Ballbustingkid
1/7/20, 12:09 PM
I was so excited for this! until I realized that james was the botttom. I mean, why can't the big strong daddy be the bottom in any of these stories?! it's so frustrating
Anonymous
1/7/20, 11:11 AM
interesting complication, would've rather a slower pace but I'm bound to assume there's more to come.
Seeker88
1/7/20, 8:53 AM
Curious about that Darker version that we missed. The battle was great and it came all down to small mistakes, humans mistakes, that makes the characters feel real. The fact that you are crossovering 2 stories seems off to me, like someone else said before I hope this don't invalidates or makes the ending of either less meaningful. Now with my concerns out of the way I'll dare to make a plea; don’t hold back in the next story! Let us know your real tastes, man! I must admit I’m very curious about what can you write when you don’t tune down things. We have seen mostly “most Evil win” ending on your stories (so I’m pretty surprised with people expecting a “good guys win” ending >.>) but I fear you may still be keeping the best stuff for yourself, share with the rest of the class :P Now in general matters of the story, the fact you can divide the audience of the site just speak wonders; ofc you could not please everyone, but I hope this is the ending that pleases yourself; this is your story after all, thx for sharing it with us. Keep up the great writing!
Anonymous
1/7/20, 8:03 AM
I feel like Todd has been acting out of character in this chapter. Considering him snapped at his minion and how inconsiderate he was, making the school a better place doesn't sound right.