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screamingmoist
1/7/20, 12:18 PM
@RazzTFs - thanks so much! Pacing is always a pain. I usually end up cutting out a ton.
May 10, 2019
Ballbustingkid
1/7/20, 12:09 PM
I was so excited for this! until I realized that james was the botttom. I mean, why can't the big strong daddy be the bottom in any of these stories?! it's so frustrating
Anonymous
1/7/20, 11:11 AM
interesting complication, would've rather a slower pace but I'm bound to assume there's more to come.
Seeker88
1/7/20, 8:53 AM
Curious about that Darker version that we missed. The battle was great and it came all down to small mistakes, humans mistakes, that makes the characters feel real. The fact that you are crossovering 2 stories seems off to me, like someone else said before I hope this don't invalidates or makes the ending of either less meaningful. Now with my concerns out of the way I'll dare to make a plea; don’t hold back in the next story! Let us know your real tastes, man! I must admit I’m very curious about what can you write when you don’t tune down things. We have seen mostly “most Evil win” ending on your stories (so I’m pretty surprised with people expecting a “good guys win” ending >.>) but I fear you may still be keeping the best stuff for yourself, share with the rest of the class :P Now in general matters of the story, the fact you can divide the audience of the site just speak wonders; ofc you could not please everyone, but I hope this is the ending that pleases yourself; this is your story after all, thx for sharing it with us. Keep up the great writing!
Anonymous
1/7/20, 8:03 AM
I feel like Todd has been acting out of character in this chapter. Considering him snapped at his minion and how inconsiderate he was, making the school a better place doesn't sound right.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 6:26 AM
Let me just get this out of the way. I really liked the story over all though it could have had a bit more smut in it, but that's just a personal preference. The way the story was structured and the tension and twists were great and made me really want to keep on reading. It felt a lot more than the usual mind control porn with plot. The ending though was a bit of a letdown for me. Not because I was rooting for Nathan to win, but because of how bland the denoument ended up, and how Todd seemed so one dimensional. The romantic in me though would have wanted a sort of twisted happy ending for Nathan, like he wins but Todd corrupts him into wanting slaves and he ends up enslaving the school, or Nathan ends up oblivious to his enslavement because of the constant companionship he has with Joe. Overall though I am still quite pleased with the story and look forward for more of your fantastic writing.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 6:25 AM
so sad for Nathan :(( , but it's nice though :))
Anonymous
1/7/20, 5:37 AM
Guys, overdramatic much? This story does not reflect anyome's morals or ethics, regardless of who you were rooting for to win. This site is not some platform that requires you to represent the ideals that you believe in. If you think the world is is treterous or whatever, go voice it out on some other platform where it would actually make a difference, not shaming an auhor for expressing himself and his fantasies. Its a gay mind control story website, where the stories are meant to have people being comtrolled against their will. What else did you expect? So get over yourselves and chill out.
1/7/20, 5:36 AM
Oh this is such a great story. I love how it's written and the guy reinforces his own changes. Inspiring.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 5:10 AM
I guess in the era of Trump, villians win.