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Anonymous
1/7/20, 3:28 AM
Haha, thanks for the explanation, Swizzington! Also when you frame Todd's loss of power that way, it does make it even more hot. I never thought to look at it that way. Its amazing how I can just appreciate this story more and more by the minute. You did a phenomenal job with this series! Great finale!
nycboot
1/7/20, 3:15 AM
Such a contrast to your normally long historical dramas! Very nice idea - thank you!
Swizzington
1/7/20, 3:03 AM
Good questions! This was something I had thought about, and was thinking of explaining, and still might in the continuation. It just never came up. They can take their glasses off briefly and still be controlled. Usually 1-4 hours, depending on the strength of the telepath and the level of resistance shown by the victim. This obviously means showering is not a problem. In regards to sleep, the mind has to be awake and conscious for the programming to deteriorate, they can't actively resist when their mind is 'off'. So yes, this means they can take it off while sleeping also. They will wake up in the same 'controlled' state as when they fell asleep. And yeah, not only did Todd deserve to lose his powers, but I actually felt like, that made it hotter, too. Having these powerful telepaths being controlled by a 'normie', and only able to use their powers at his behest, made it more enjoyable for me, personally.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 2:44 AM
The story could've been darker? Interesting, I wouldve wanted to see that story. I enjoyed the ending actually, theres at least one satisfied fan here. I really wished that Todd didn't lose his power though. He needed some form of karma I suppose. Also, just a random thing thats been eating on me for a while, do all the puppets sleep with the glasses on? Its clearly states that the glasses is the thing keeping permanent control so does that mean they sleep with that, and better yet, do they take those things to the shower as well?
1/7/20, 2:43 AM
Damn, this is just masterfully done. And I don't just mean the sex -- the pacing and development was phenomenal! Personally I have a lot of trouble with pacing, so it's always inspiring to see someone get it right. And so succinctly -- truly, great job all around.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 2:27 AM
Awesome and understood, no guarantees. I'll email when I get home...
Swizzington
1/7/20, 2:17 AM
All readers are welcome to email me at their convenience. I am happy to entertain all ideas. No guarantees anything will come of it, though :-)
Anonymous
1/7/20, 2:05 AM
I for one am psyched Todd won and it was great how you had Dylan step in! Actually wish you had left Todd more Todd, given Joey the same stone statue treatment too. I saw you write that you had darker tastes and toned it down. Would you care to collaborate on a darker version or a new story? just respond here with a yes and I'll email you. It would be a blast!!!
K
1/7/20, 1:48 AM
I appreciate your story It's a good story and I have fun reading it!! Honestly I still want Nathan to win Haha I want to see my ship NathanxJoe sailing in the sea~ Don't worry You will see me at the next story~ still never ever on Todd side though~ I really want to see "slave Todd" too
M
1/7/20, 1:45 AM
YEEEEESS! Vindication! Also karma, as well as coherent well thought out plot. i gotta say, the brilliance if the plot is just as appealing to me as the sex, which there wasn't tons of, and i was still totally down with that.