Recent Comments

Swizzington
1/7/20, 2:17 AM
All readers are welcome to email me at their convenience. I am happy to entertain all ideas. No guarantees anything will come of it, though :-)
Anonymous
1/7/20, 2:05 AM
I for one am psyched Todd won and it was great how you had Dylan step in! Actually wish you had left Todd more Todd, given Joey the same stone statue treatment too. I saw you write that you had darker tastes and toned it down. Would you care to collaborate on a darker version or a new story? just respond here with a yes and I'll email you. It would be a blast!!!
K
1/7/20, 1:48 AM
I appreciate your story It's a good story and I have fun reading it!! Honestly I still want Nathan to win Haha I want to see my ship NathanxJoe sailing in the sea~ Don't worry You will see me at the next story~ still never ever on Todd side though~ I really want to see "slave Todd" too
M
1/7/20, 1:45 AM
YEEEEESS! Vindication! Also karma, as well as coherent well thought out plot. i gotta say, the brilliance if the plot is just as appealing to me as the sex, which there wasn't tons of, and i was still totally down with that.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 1:40 AM
I have to admit that while the writing was superb, I felt really let down by the ending. It felt hollow. It might have been more interesting if Nathan left the control on Joe and freed the others having Dylan take Todd back home
Swizzington
1/7/20, 1:38 AM
I guess my tastes are a little darker than most of the readers here. :-) I actually toned it down a little bit, too!
This is my favorite story series in 'Gay Spiral Stories.'
1/7/20, 1:31 AM
The sex is hot but it's everything else that's happening that makes it a compelling read for me. Anxiously waiting for the next episode. Great work.
UchihaDEMS
1/7/20, 1:29 AM
I was expecting that at some point, all that came after Nathan went to stone was just a dream of Todd inside the hourglass... I must admit, I do like the story... but I hated the end.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
1/7/20, 12:56 AM
Nathan needs to join Todd in his endeavors. The two together, with Todd's brother Dylan also joining them, could not be stopped.
SadReader
1/7/20, 12:55 AM
I was hoping the ending would be different. This somehow felt unsatisfying. Anyways, excellent writing. I will see if Nathan and Joe will be back to not being a slave in the sequel.