Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/7/20, 2:44 AM
The story could've been darker? Interesting, I wouldve wanted to see that story. I enjoyed the ending actually, theres at least one satisfied fan here. I really wished that Todd didn't lose his power though. He needed some form of karma I suppose. Also, just a random thing thats been eating on me for a while, do all the puppets sleep with the glasses on? Its clearly states that the glasses is the thing keeping permanent control so does that mean they sleep with that, and better yet, do they take those things to the shower as well?
1/7/20, 2:43 AM
Damn, this is just masterfully done. And I don't just mean the sex -- the pacing and development was phenomenal! Personally I have a lot of trouble with pacing, so it's always inspiring to see someone get it right. And so succinctly -- truly, great job all around.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 2:27 AM
Awesome and understood, no guarantees. I'll email when I get home...
Swizzington
1/7/20, 2:17 AM
All readers are welcome to email me at their convenience. I am happy to entertain all ideas. No guarantees anything will come of it, though :-)
Anonymous
1/7/20, 2:05 AM
I for one am psyched Todd won and it was great how you had Dylan step in! Actually wish you had left Todd more Todd, given Joey the same stone statue treatment too. I saw you write that you had darker tastes and toned it down. Would you care to collaborate on a darker version or a new story? just respond here with a yes and I'll email you. It would be a blast!!!
K
1/7/20, 1:48 AM
I appreciate your story It's a good story and I have fun reading it!! Honestly I still want Nathan to win Haha I want to see my ship NathanxJoe sailing in the sea~ Don't worry You will see me at the next story~ still never ever on Todd side though~ I really want to see "slave Todd" too
M
1/7/20, 1:45 AM
YEEEEESS! Vindication! Also karma, as well as coherent well thought out plot. i gotta say, the brilliance if the plot is just as appealing to me as the sex, which there wasn't tons of, and i was still totally down with that.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 1:40 AM
I have to admit that while the writing was superb, I felt really let down by the ending. It felt hollow. It might have been more interesting if Nathan left the control on Joe and freed the others having Dylan take Todd back home
Swizzington
1/7/20, 1:38 AM
I guess my tastes are a little darker than most of the readers here. :-) I actually toned it down a little bit, too!
This is my favorite story series in 'Gay Spiral Stories.'
1/7/20, 1:31 AM
The sex is hot but it's everything else that's happening that makes it a compelling read for me. Anxiously waiting for the next episode. Great work.