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This is my favorite story series in 'Gay Spiral Stories.'
1/7/20, 1:31 AM
The sex is hot but it's everything else that's happening that makes it a compelling read for me. Anxiously waiting for the next episode. Great work.
UchihaDEMS
1/7/20, 1:29 AM
I was expecting that at some point, all that came after Nathan went to stone was just a dream of Todd inside the hourglass... I must admit, I do like the story... but I hated the end.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
1/7/20, 12:56 AM
Nathan needs to join Todd in his endeavors. The two together, with Todd's brother Dylan also joining them, could not be stopped.
SadReader
1/7/20, 12:55 AM
I was hoping the ending would be different. This somehow felt unsatisfying. Anyways, excellent writing. I will see if Nathan and Joe will be back to not being a slave in the sequel.
LongtimeFan
1/7/20, 12:37 AM
Hey, this is the one place on the Internet where I actually DO read the comments. :p Check your e-mail!
Swizzington
1/7/20, 12:28 AM
Also, I'm not sure if you'll see this message, LongtimeFan, but could you possibly shoot me an email? My address is at the top of the page. I want to ask you about something in private.
Swizzington
1/7/20, 12:20 AM
I'm hoping to get *The Further Adventures of a Mind Controller* finished in the first quarter of 2020. I'm like 7 chapters in right now. But no promises :-)
1/7/20, 12:12 AM
A very good story; you drew me in and had me hooked. I look forward to seeing the story continue, but the ending made me want to write my own continuation as do a number of stories on the site. That's a testament to your writing and the strength of it; I hope I can draw upon it to make something that can sit in the ball park of the world that you've created.
Anonymous
1/6/20, 11:57 PM
Any ideas when we can expect the next installment?
Good boy
1/6/20, 11:56 PM
praise be Master Todd i want to obey him