Recent Comments

Good boy
1/6/20, 11:56 PM
praise be Master Todd i want to obey him
1/6/20, 11:51 PM
Also... I just remember... i keep thinking on joe mind "liberation"... if the chess pieces nathan fix where from joe side, that means he restore his original personality... but what happen with Todd's pieces??? When joe took one, a new treat was added to his personality... so i guess since nathan doesn't know that... that means joe was still with all the extra treats todd add to him (like adoration to todd, submissiveness and the others)?
1/6/20, 11:41 PM
I think I don't have a lot to say but thank you! This story was a wonderful experience ^ ^ I feel sorry about the cock shrink of joe and nathan... but besides that it was an amazing series :D I keep an eye on the next series ^ ^
Swizzington
1/6/20, 11:39 PM
He is the main character in my next story.
Anonymous
1/6/20, 11:19 PM
Sorry am I missing something or is Mr. Zeiss a character I should know about?
Swizzington
1/6/20, 11:04 PM
I did try to make it seem like Dylan wasn't too happy about doing what he did to Nathan; an extension of his comments in the real world just before that. But maybe I missed the mark. He wasn't pleased about it, but he had no choice but to obey. Being snarky or showing a lack of enthusiasm is much easier than actually disobeying. Z, Zeiss' escape will be showcased in the sequel. The timelines of the two stories overlap in the middle :-)
Anonymous
1/6/20, 10:55 PM
I'll be honest, Swizz, I was worried because I didn't know how you could actually live up to the hype of the ending because there are a lot of expectations from you. But let me just say, I was wrong to have my worries. The ending felt very satisfying and I was personally happy with how everything turned out for everyone. I'm a little nervous about your next series because I don't want anything from this ending to be undone in the next one and I'm worried that things will get reversed or something. But for you, I will give your Mind Controllers a shot and fingers crossed that nothing gets reversed or any shenanigans like that Thank you so much for sharing your stories with us and it was great discovering you. You are now one of my fave authors!
Anonymous
1/6/20, 10:51 PM
i agree about the quick turn around for Dylan, with that "sure..." comment he shouldnt have so quickly been eager to correct joe's actions like he did. Also might be in the minority here but i was hoping for Nathan winning >..>
Z
1/6/20, 10:50 PM
I just read the original story that features Mr Zeiss and I gotta say I have no idea how he got here from working in that restaurant under Steve. Especially since, the last time we saw him he'd just gotten his powers locked away...
Z
1/6/20, 10:47 PM
Oh wow you really had a way with twists don't you. I love it. Also I can't believe this is set in the same universe as Slave Academy. I'm curious to see how Zeiss went from the restaurant to Todd Academy now..