Recent Comments

12/3/24, 10:35 AM
we are in for a great start
12/3/24, 9:42 AM
Loving this series, think it time that Jake was forced to join, he will feel better for it. "Resistance is Futile"
12/2/24, 7:27 AM
Again, regarding the Google translator issues, Sir, I slowed my reading and watched more carefully for translation issues. There are in fact numerous cases where the translation wording is definitely awkward in a way that might bother a few readers, but again, personally i did not find any of them serious enough to affect my understanding. Are you really concerned about revising your original? Or perhaps you also have an interest in improving your own English, Sir? If it pleases you, Sir, i am happy to provide more specific feedback.

12/2/24, 8:59 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thanks for the feedback, my friend. But sorry, I don't have the energy to improve my English in recent times. Maybe I'll find time to learn English and revise the stories in the future. Of course, use the logic, cultural context, and rhetoric of the English language. But for me lately, completion is more important than perfection. Perhaps, you or someone else can revise the story from the perspective of a native English speaker. The names of people, places, and adjectives can be more in line with your habits. It's equivalent that I'm just providing ideas for the development of the story, but English speakers will definitely have a better reading experience.

12/3/24, 6:52 AM
@[MC Master](/user/show/10003908) Really, I don't have a problem myself. The issues aren't significant enough to hinder understanding. If you are happy, I am happy. No one else has commented, so let's assume the best. I would rather spend time reading, and will look forward to read whatever you decide to write. Have fun with it!
11/28/24, 11:53 AM
Definitely looking forward to more. Glad to see you publishing again (or maybe I've just been away for a bit haha)

12/3/24, 5:11 AM
@[Master Sarouk](/user/show/2319535) Thank you for commenting. I've been putting stuff up, but this piece, like I said in the author's note, I held on to this for a while. Then I decided it was almost ready and went about getting it ready to publish and finally followed through and got it up for all to read.

12/3/24, 6:36 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Oh yeah for sure I saw the note =) I'm glad it wasn't stuck in the authors limbo for any longer! It's great as is (but at the same time I know how it is wanting to get that extra little bit of craft into a final piece!)
11/30/24, 9:42 AM
Interesting approach to how things changed after the resistance. Hope we see more Given that u talked with Swizz, is this an official continuation for the series? Or is it an AU?

12/3/24, 5:49 AM
@[zeeker8b](/user/show/15282) Thank you for your comments. This is a series so the story will continue and other characters from the universe will appear. In my conversations with Swizz, he suggested that Joe should appear since he's a popular character so I worked him in. It was easier to do so with the Nor Cal setting, putting him at Cal Berkeley on their swim team. Swizz definitely gave his blessing for this work, but as I said, my version is set in Nor Cal whereas Swizz said the original happens on the East Coast. I can say this isn't an official continuation, but wouldn't say it's an alternate universe...I don't think that captures it. I would say it's an officially sanctioned fan fiction. I actually showed Swizz a draft of this chapter so the original author signed off on my version of his story. I hope that helps and keeps you interested in where the story goes.
11/27/24, 11:16 PM
Nice to see a glimpse into the future of my favourite series.

12/3/24, 5:08 AM
@[benelliot](/user/show/909446) Thank you for commenting. Definitely some time has gone past since the events of Resistance.
Inspector Date-ing
12/3/24, 3:29 AM
I wonder how long until Weston destroying Tim's moral compass comes back to bite him in the form of a betrayal. In a sense, if Tim was willing to use his powers to make Weston drop it, that could have avoided a lot of trouble for himself, but he was perhaps too scrupulous about it. Anyways, this was pretty hot! I look forward to your future works!
12/3/24, 2:46 AM
This story is excellent. Please continue!
Anonymous
12/1/24, 3:45 PM
Wonderful story! Do you ever plan on continuing it? :3

12/3/24, 2:18 AM
@Anonymous No plans. I know some of the character’s fates (what Abe ends up doing, etc) it’s just none of it makes an erotic story. They kinda of just… get on with their lives 😅 Big thank you for reading.
Anonymous
12/3/24, 1:35 AM
cant stop cumming