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M
1/6/20, 5:23 AM
Ahh, satisfaction is so sweet! The brotherly showdown is very believable yet it was not predictable! I enjoyed definitively showing that Dylan's bluster is completely supported by the mental battle's events. He would have won, if not for Todd's actual trump card, Chester's serum. And Chester's glasses. Hell, just Chester in General! i was looking forward to seeing the subjugation of Chester this chapter, but i am completely pleased to know it is something to look forward to. I am still not any more enamored towards Nathan yet, so I don't know if I want to go so far as to root for him to triumph, but i can see how he might be a valid threat. Nathan is not cocky in relation to Todd, so he's not likely to allow himself to be caught facing down with Todd with all his cronies in tow. this story is so gratifying in its complexity and how it also panders to my love of an unredeemable protagonist. Todd is a horrible person, unapologetic, and has the power to get away with it. He gets to get away with all the bad behavior I cannot because i need to conform to social rules. His horrific actions as well as personality are so liberating and why I hope he stays on top.
Anonymous
1/6/20, 4:21 AM
thank you
1/6/20, 4:14 AM
Currently working on another series entry, but should get another chapter of this in the near future.
Anonymous
1/6/20, 3:36 AM
Thats hot, bit more and more descriptive on the sex and its hot as fuck looking forward to the next paths and fails
1/6/20, 2:39 AM
I'm glad you liked it (those who did). At this time, I don't have any plans to continue this series, since I don't have a concrete story idea for its progression, but I did leave things open for a spinoff story or continuation. I may return to it if i have a solid idea but am happy with it as a story that has a satisfying beginning and end to it
Bibimbap
1/6/20, 12:22 AM
Hi again, and thanks for other chapter! the idea of bimbo bears is increasingly appealing to me! I love the concept! I guess Benji is becoming even dumber than Burro, ha, ha! Im curious about who's the new guy. By the way, Angus sounds like a strong hard manly name and Angel, while not exactly soft, doesn't sound as strong as his former name. I wonder who's the new guy and what's going on, but Im more than ready to discover it! I wish you a great year!
Anonymous
1/5/20, 11:22 PM
Excellent
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1/5/20, 10:21 PM
These oblivious reality change type transformations are my jam! Loved every word, great work
JoBloe
1/5/20, 9:08 PM
Good story! I would have liked more Speedo scenes and cock sucking through Speedos. Also, more descriptive butt fucking, especially with our studs in jockstraps, etc. Thanks and Happy Erotic Writing! NEMA!!! 👅
1/5/20, 8:50 PM
Well, Miles went down fast. I wish there had been more of the moment of betrayal -- perhaps Stephen could've orgasmed when he so happily and easily did his friend and roommate in. Or maybe extend the transformation so his horror can mount until he HAS to give in to the Master. All good. I'm still loving this series. I think we all just banked a little more on Miles because of his late entrance.