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Anonymous
1/5/20, 6:32 PM
To say I saw this coming would be an understatement. Well hoping that something goes right in the next chapter....
1/5/20, 6:32 PM
That's a fair critique. I think both the Master and I just wanted Miles out of the way quickly.
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1/5/20, 6:17 PM
Somehow I sense Dylan is going to win in the end. I just hope Nathan and Joey end up as a couple. With Todd forced to be a Chubby and Flamboyant slave with a small cock.
Anonymous
1/5/20, 6:14 PM
So Dylan gets overtaken, which leaves one to ask: what chance does Nathan have against Todd? Or can Dylan and Nathan overtake Todd. Or does Todd end up the total top of the school, fucking everyone mentally, literally and figuratively. Todd is such an asshole that no one wants him to succeed. But, if he did, it would not surprise me. It is the world we live in.
Anonymous
1/5/20, 5:54 PM
As usual, I'm excited for more. You're my new favorite author.
Anonymous
1/5/20, 5:52 PM
More please
Anonymous
1/5/20, 5:28 PM
Todd isn't even likeable.
Swizzington
1/5/20, 4:52 PM
nycboot, thank you for your insightful question. The way I have envisioned the telepathy in this universe is such that, when two telepaths engage each other, it is quite a different situation to when a telepath simply assaults the mind of a 'normie'. Although I try to make it plain in this chapter that Dylan is clearly more powerful than his brother, Todd is not powerless nor defenseless. Todd, like any telepath, would be able to shield their thoughts and memories. At least, until they are defeated or their powers are removed by a certain serum. Although Todd got his butt kicked for a little while, he was never 'broken'. Thus, Dylan never had access to his thoughts, like he would with a non-telepath. I hope this makes sense :-)
Anonymous
1/5/20, 4:28 PM
Nice, although I feel like this part went to fast and Miles went under too quickly. Would have liked to have seen more of a build-up, struggle, and more sex.
K
1/5/20, 3:38 PM
I knew it!! AHH I really don't want Todd to win!!That guy is crazy!! Please Nathan! turn the table!! Honestly I want Todd to have happy ending too BUT...😭😭 I Hate Him So Much I Don't Know What To Do!! So please let him get what he deserves!! In this chapter, I really like Chester part when he struggled to break free. let me see his genius side more!