Recent Comments

Regular Reader
1/5/20, 7:57 AM
I didn't find the writing *or* the plot up to the usually great Willie Cici standard.
Anonymous
1/5/20, 7:40 AM
^^Agree 100,000 percent. Just because Nathan is against Todd who is "the bad guy", doesn't make him a good guy by default. I'm actually quite disturbed at how nasty his words can get sometimes. You would think that Nathan would be a little more considerate since he probably endured being bullied in school and probably was an outcast at one point, but instead he's kind of a bully like Mike and Chester (minus the physical violence) to the point where he didnt want his friends to approach him on his first day. So what I'm saying is, he's no better than any of Todd's bullies and quite frankly, he is not that far behind from Todd, he also gets very possessive of Joe and acts very entitled in some ways too.
Anonymous
1/5/20, 6:48 AM
i hope he gets sissy punished
Anonymous
1/5/20, 6:46 AM
highkey wish the last 3 chapters could just be released. the buildup and suspense are killing me haha
Anonymous
1/5/20, 6:41 AM
I actually dont like Nathan and Dylan because they are so judgmental about Todd.. If you really read closely, Nathan constantly trash talks on Todd to the point that I feel sorry for him. I mean he was the first person to not want Joe to make friends with his cousin and when he brings Todd up to his mom, he immediately trashes on him even before he found out about his mind controling powers. Dylan also sounds like a complete douche, looking down on his brother a lot. Its no wonder he turned out this way. i dont feel sorry for either of em and am looking forward to them getting their commupance
1/5/20, 6:25 AM
Very hot. I’m not usually into straight up hypnosis stories, but this is well written and very hot.
1/5/20, 5:28 AM
I was going to say the same as the above comment. Reading so many comments about how much they hate Todd is a perfect compliment to your writing. I also hate Todd, and this chapter made me oh so hate him. And the comments about seeing it strongly through Todd's perspective I agree with. But carry on, this is your story and take us where you will (Master, milord and Sir)
Anonymous
1/5/20, 5:23 AM
i just realized how much it fits for a calico cat to be a femboy-TF. good going, Terinas. hehe
Anonymous
1/5/20, 5:21 AM
I am in awe of this story and the author. Kudos for another great chapter!
Anonymous
1/5/20, 5:07 AM
I love these stories, but especially this one!!!