Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/5/20, 5:21 AM
I am in awe of this story and the author. Kudos for another great chapter!
Anonymous
1/5/20, 5:07 AM
I love these stories, but especially this one!!!
Anonymous
1/5/20, 5:06 AM
That was hot! Can't wait to see how this one plays out!!!
K
1/5/20, 5:03 AM
I like this chapter! I wish Dylan will beat Todd ass!!! but I feel something bad is coming.. I wish Dylan don't look down on his brother too much I really don't like Todd he is a shit head Nathaniel please help Joe and others And may be I want to see Todd get what he deserves crazy guy like him should not be someone master
Anonymous
1/5/20, 4:51 AM
Todd sucks. I don't want to even see Dylan go under Todd's control with this serum. I am totally okay with Joe being controlled by Nathan. Nathan and Joe need to end up together.
1/5/20, 4:38 AM
oh that makes me sad there only 10 chapters im loving todd slow enslavement of the school and how he twisting everyone to fit his own needs.
Swizzington
1/5/20, 1:08 AM
The enslavement of Wilkins (the counselor) will become relevant again in chapter 9 :-) There are 10 chapters total, plus an epilogue, maybe.
Anonymous
1/5/20, 1:08 AM
Clearly, the majority of people in the comment section wants Nathan to succeed, so that It should be plain to see where the story should conclude right? Todd needs to die a violent death!
Anonymous
1/5/20, 1:01 AM
Hey Swizzington, I wouldn't say that "nothing" happened in this chapter. I enjoyed learning the capacity of the family's powers. I'm also with the other commentor about wanting to have Joey do more slutty things for Todd, especially since he lost his inhibitions and arousal or something from the chess match. That couldn't just be for nothing. Also, I was hoping for Todd to use the teacher's influence to bring in more puppets. I'm not sure how many chapters we have left but it feels like the Dylan and Nathan confrontations might be the ending of this series. Thanka for your updates and I'm excited to see how it ends.
Swizzington
1/5/20, 12:58 AM
Well, Nathan did mention he had never heard anyone use the word 'shizzle' before, nycboot. An ill-advised affectation on Dylan's part, perhaps :-)