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Anonymous
1/4/20, 10:36 PM
Next chapter pleassssssse
Anonymous
1/4/20, 10:24 PM
"Artificial" race change (trying to look like another race) to fix the cognitive dissonance he's now experiencing...extremely hot
NzDom
1/4/20, 10:23 PM
mmm.. love the chapter. knew Nathan had it in him ! would've been nice to have had more detailed sexual domination of Joey tho. Hopefully we get to see more young dom old sub action as well ! Thank you !
Anonymous
1/4/20, 9:50 PM
Todd's impatience had blowing on him before, and really seems like it will again in the future; he is not even smart enough to listen someone smarter than him; we have seem how he is not a competent evil mastermind more than once; so it's looks(at least for me) lime he is not going to win; time will tell. A nice chapter, good to slowdown a little for this build up; wonder if we will see a mind battle next
Anonymous
1/4/20, 9:39 PM
Hot!πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯
Anonymous
1/4/20, 9:31 PM
This story has been really incredible and builds up so much tension, the pacing is excellent, I just wish there was more actual sex. After Joe's chess game described his increased sex drive I was hoping for a section from his perspective being an unihibited slut.
Nawd
1/4/20, 9:23 PM
Amazing chapter! Someone already said it, but your stories entice me because you have amazing inventiveness. I really wish for Todd to win at this point and see Nathan go under, but I'll be satisfied either way. The story is amazing, keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapters and the finale :)
Baby piglet
1/4/20, 9:17 PM
Hottest shit ever! i fucking love itπŸ’•
Anonymous
1/4/20, 9:06 PM
Personally at this point I am truly done with Todd. I have a feeling like he is going to win in the end which...I have gotten used to that l, but I don't like. Do what ya want with the story but at this point its not enjoyable for me anymore. I'm glad Nathan learned how to do "mind control", but its probably too late. I guess we shall see if Joe is saved next chapter or something worse goes down. Probably Dylan is going to go under Todd's control and its game over from there. Like I said oh well. Story had a nice start but now it is just getting too predictable
Anonymous
1/4/20, 8:35 PM
No escape. Thank you, Master.