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Anonymous
1/4/20, 11:50 PM
I love Dylan it's perfect
LongtimeFan
1/4/20, 11:26 PM
I like it! Here are my guesses as to what will happen: Nathan will manage to touch Joe's head but not break the control. The serum will allow Todd to overpower Dylan briefly, and they'll fight--and then Todd will use the personality gas he stole from Mike to defeat him (oh, my dear Swizzington, you are SO good at loading Chekhov's Guns). ;p Although, given what happened in "How to be a Good Boy," I wonder if Dylan built in some kind of protection just in case...either that, or Todd's impatience and arrogance (which we see happening with the spy bug breaking because he rushed Chester) will cause a glitch, like the serum not working or lasting forever. And it all builds to a big final showdown between Nathan and Todd! I certainly am excited to see what happens!
FemaleFartslut
1/4/20, 11:06 PM
Absolutely loved it! There aren't enough stories like this and I love how you write them - I hope you continue to write more! <3
Anonymous
1/4/20, 10:36 PM
Next chapter pleassssssse
Anonymous
1/4/20, 10:24 PM
"Artificial" race change (trying to look like another race) to fix the cognitive dissonance he's now experiencing...extremely hot
NzDom
1/4/20, 10:23 PM
mmm.. love the chapter. knew Nathan had it in him ! would've been nice to have had more detailed sexual domination of Joey tho. Hopefully we get to see more young dom old sub action as well ! Thank you !
Anonymous
1/4/20, 9:50 PM
Todd's impatience had blowing on him before, and really seems like it will again in the future; he is not even smart enough to listen someone smarter than him; we have seem how he is not a competent evil mastermind more than once; so it's looks(at least for me) lime he is not going to win; time will tell. A nice chapter, good to slowdown a little for this build up; wonder if we will see a mind battle next
Anonymous
1/4/20, 9:39 PM
Hot!🔥🔥🔥
Anonymous
1/4/20, 9:31 PM
This story has been really incredible and builds up so much tension, the pacing is excellent, I just wish there was more actual sex. After Joe's chess game described his increased sex drive I was hoping for a section from his perspective being an unihibited slut.
Nawd
1/4/20, 9:23 PM
Amazing chapter! Someone already said it, but your stories entice me because you have amazing inventiveness. I really wish for Todd to win at this point and see Nathan go under, but I'll be satisfied either way. The story is amazing, keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapters and the finale :)