Recent Comments

1/4/20, 5:08 PM
Well, this is a first for me. I normally never like stories with race change and I also cringed when I saw the tags for this chapter, but this turned up incredible hot. The part from after Charlie logged off and right through to the end is easily some of the hottest writing I have read in a long while. I just love how he instantly begins changing all aspects of his normal life to make it more like his virtual life, a fake avatar he now considers to be his true self. It is so hot that he suddenly feels so uncomfortable in his own body and that it is so urgent for him to change everything about himself. Please keep writing.
Anonymous
1/4/20, 4:44 PM
I think you should reduce some knowledge out of teacher, make him stupid and dumb.
Swizzington
1/4/20, 4:44 PM
Some people want Nathan to win. Some people want Todd to win. I guess I'm going to disappoint people no matter what... :-)
Anonymous
1/4/20, 4:40 PM
How about father and son or brothers? Reverse father into son' friend.
Anonymous
1/4/20, 4:21 PM
This was one of the first stories I read on the old NCMC site. It made me hard then, and, now, on the re-read, I got harder. Incredible story!!!
1/4/20, 4:03 PM
I believe this amount of personal account changes and such would be noticed by the Admins and would be rectified soon. But there's no harm in indulging for now. Of course, since the new mental changes had been painted over the old paint, it would be nigh impossible to remove the new paint now. Can't let the paint dry now can we?
Anonymous
1/4/20, 3:50 PM
The reaction you're getting to Todd only confirms how well-written the story is. If no one hated Todd, then the story would be flat. Can't wait to see where this is headed. I'm binge reading the series and haven't reached the next chapter.
Anonymous
1/4/20, 2:11 PM
so creative and sexy. can't wait for the next.
Anonymous
1/4/20, 2:11 PM
Really happy to see this continue - and great writing as always. Carter's transformation is a really neat idea - excited to see more of him!
Anonymous
1/4/20, 1:29 PM
I hope Liam gets diaper punished