Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/4/20, 6:39 PM
I appreciate how fast you're able to update your chapters for this story. I cant imagine how challenging it must be to do so, and its always a pleasant treat whenever I see your updates on the site. Not so many authors can publish installments as quickly as you can and I don't want to take that for granted. So thank you!
Swizzington
1/4/20, 6:26 PM
Oh, of course! While I enjoy reading everyone's comments, thoughts and ideas, if there is anything I have learned over the years posting here, it is not to allow myself to be influenced by the comment section. :-)
Anonymous
1/4/20, 5:27 PM
Yea, like the commenter above says, I don't want you being swayed by the commenters opinions. Its more important to end the story with how you originally envisioned it. You're doing a good job and I'm enjoying the Todd/Nathan showdown
1/4/20, 5:22 PM
Great story. Can't wait to see it continued.
Anonymous
1/4/20, 5:18 PM
@Swizzington, For me, the reeason why I support Todd is because I want the puppets to stay into puppets at the end of the series. I'm just sadistic that way, lol. I wouldn't be opposed to a Nathan win if he somehow has the telephatic mind control powers as well, figures out about it, and them decides to take the puppets as his own personal slaves.
lucasthemighty@gmail.com
1/4/20, 5:15 PM
Its you're story you write like you want to. I was just stating my opinion. I'll probably like the story either way.
1/4/20, 5:08 PM
Well, this is a first for me. I normally never like stories with race change and I also cringed when I saw the tags for this chapter, but this turned up incredible hot. The part from after Charlie logged off and right through to the end is easily some of the hottest writing I have read in a long while. I just love how he instantly begins changing all aspects of his normal life to make it more like his virtual life, a fake avatar he now considers to be his true self. It is so hot that he suddenly feels so uncomfortable in his own body and that it is so urgent for him to change everything about himself. Please keep writing.
Anonymous
1/4/20, 4:44 PM
I think you should reduce some knowledge out of teacher, make him stupid and dumb.
Swizzington
1/4/20, 4:44 PM
Some people want Nathan to win. Some people want Todd to win. I guess I'm going to disappoint people no matter what... :-)
Anonymous
1/4/20, 4:40 PM
How about father and son or brothers? Reverse father into son' friend.