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LongtimeFan
1/4/20, 11:32 AM
Another great chapter! I love the self-awareness Adrien possesses (the line "the hero of a story he didn't ask to be in" is pure poetry--I shuddered!), and the interesting implication of Cheslav's powers. Plus the hypnosis scene was achingly hot...call me old-fashioned, but a guy getting sleepy and relaxed and compliant is such a turn-on. Awesome stuff! :)
Anonymous
1/4/20, 11:13 AM
some mistakes in Italian sentences
Anonymous
1/4/20, 9:04 AM
hope to see Miles again but i do not mind if there be a sequel!!
lucasthemighty@gmail.com
1/4/20, 9:03 AM
It is an amazing story so far. It would be awesome to see Nathan fall pray to Todd, though.
nerdysuitedbaby
1/4/20, 6:59 AM
You know I love the Shawn character mind fuck. This was a decent chapter although like I have mentioned felt Mike needed it built broader based on the visual in chapter 1 with him call the shots manhandling Todd and in a sense Nathan. To me to matching band and chess board was the superior mind fucks. Loving the comments on this just as much as I love this story. Going to DM you just had to see how you went with this.
Anonymous
1/4/20, 6:02 AM
I really like where this is going. Quite honestly, I'm not sure if I want Nathan to fall and become part of Todd's club. He is so much better being an outsider looking in and being an outcast. What I want for sure is Todd to succeed in the end. I kinda want him to take down his brother next. He should see his text message from Nathan's phone and know where they're meeting. I admit, this is just the shallow side of me, but one small complaint i have in this series is that I want more man on man sex action. But thats just my personal opinion, I still would like the author to do his own thing and write as he pleases.
K
1/4/20, 5:42 AM
I really want to see what will happen next now! lol It a cool chapter I like how the teacher became a slave And I really ship Nathan with Joe. Nathan always "Joe so cuteee " like this, so I wish he fight all the way he could to save him or make him his PS. as always save Joe please!!!
Anonymous
1/4/20, 5:24 AM
I feel like an oddball here considering that I want Nathan's demise at the end. First and foremost, I enjoy reading stories on this site because I like reading about guys losing their free will and being powerless to resist another person's control. And so, having Joe, Shawn, Chester and Mike set free at the end would be such a travesty and a total let down considering the primary purpose of this site is to tell stories about guys falling under mind control. Also, I find Todd's narcissistic tendencies very fascinating, and I like how he changes the people around him to fit his desires. In real world stories, guys like him would never "win" in the end, and so it would be a nice change of pace to have him come out on top for once. Just my personal opinion though. I would like to know if there are others who feel the same.
LongtimeFan
1/4/20, 5:05 AM
Oh, dear. Todd may be a horrific person, but he sure knows how to plan. "It is a dangerous thing when an intelligent man falls to crime," as Sherlock Holmes once said. And I rather called that the story opened with a dream sequence--if only because you would NEVER skip so much brainwashing, Swizzington. :p Let's see what happens...
Anonymous
1/4/20, 4:45 AM
I like this story so far and personally have no problems with the things that Todd is doing to his victims. The one thing I personally didn't like is the penis shrinking he did to Shawn. Not because I felt sorry for him, but I just don't like body changes like that and it personally turns me off. Other than that, I'm enjoying this story quite a lot. I especially like Shawn and Mitch's momentary relapse of free will, their tortured state is arousing