Recent Comments

K
1/4/20, 5:42 AM
I really want to see what will happen next now! lol It a cool chapter I like how the teacher became a slave And I really ship Nathan with Joe. Nathan always "Joe so cuteee " like this, so I wish he fight all the way he could to save him or make him his PS. as always save Joe please!!!
Anonymous
1/4/20, 5:24 AM
I feel like an oddball here considering that I want Nathan's demise at the end. First and foremost, I enjoy reading stories on this site because I like reading about guys losing their free will and being powerless to resist another person's control. And so, having Joe, Shawn, Chester and Mike set free at the end would be such a travesty and a total let down considering the primary purpose of this site is to tell stories about guys falling under mind control. Also, I find Todd's narcissistic tendencies very fascinating, and I like how he changes the people around him to fit his desires. In real world stories, guys like him would never "win" in the end, and so it would be a nice change of pace to have him come out on top for once. Just my personal opinion though. I would like to know if there are others who feel the same.
LongtimeFan
1/4/20, 5:05 AM
Oh, dear. Todd may be a horrific person, but he sure knows how to plan. "It is a dangerous thing when an intelligent man falls to crime," as Sherlock Holmes once said. And I rather called that the story opened with a dream sequence--if only because you would NEVER skip so much brainwashing, Swizzington. :p Let's see what happens...
Anonymous
1/4/20, 4:45 AM
I like this story so far and personally have no problems with the things that Todd is doing to his victims. The one thing I personally didn't like is the penis shrinking he did to Shawn. Not because I felt sorry for him, but I just don't like body changes like that and it personally turns me off. Other than that, I'm enjoying this story quite a lot. I especially like Shawn and Mitch's momentary relapse of free will, their tortured state is arousing
Gaylord
1/4/20, 2:53 AM
make a chapter where Nathaniel falls victim in the office too
codypony@aol.com
1/4/20, 2:26 AM
Is everybody **happy!!** I know i would be! Thanks for a great series.
codypony@aol.com
1/4/20, 2:16 AM
Hmmmm... And just how Big are their Feet I'd like to know! :-)) Loved every unique transformation detail too. Milk and Veins and all. Thanks!
1/4/20, 1:02 AM
Love the ending with the teacher how when dressed up in his new look does not make him look good. Great level of humiliation added. Love to see more humiliating uniforms. Great work and cant wait for the next chapters.
Meaner Nook
1/4/20, 12:09 AM
This is one of the hottest stories on this site in a long while. Lots of hypno, lots of farts. Not enough stories with that content on the site, and most with it don't have nearly enough. The concept of the Mind Kit has a lot of potential, too, and it seems well-used here. Spelling and readability is on-point. All-in-all, shit, amazing work. Makes sense, though, coming from the author who wrote one of my other favorite stories on here. Please, more content from you!
Lusty Stallion
1/3/20, 11:56 PM
Fucking loved it man! wow!