Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/3/20, 6:27 PM
very fun reading.
Swizzington
1/3/20, 6:21 PM
Good observation, nycboot, and I understand why you would think that. However, it is the eyeglasses that Chester designed that are doing most of the heavy lifting here. The exact nature of Todd's telepathic abilities will be explained in greater detail in chapter 7.
Anonymous
1/3/20, 5:41 PM
I agree something is going to overload in him, even with the serum.
Mdlftr
1/3/20, 4:41 PM
Well written, surprisingly intriguing task-oriented story! It's reminding me of Disney World's "Tower of Terror" ride - the 1920s ghostly hotel.
nycboot
1/3/20, 4:36 PM
Hey again Swizz, According what I've read, Todd has enslaved: Chester, Amelia, Mitch, Joe, Shawn, Mike, Bethany, Jessica, and Mike. That's 9 people over which he keeps tabs. Isn't the neural switchboard inside his head approaching overload?
Mdlftr
1/3/20, 4:31 PM
Intriguing start! I can't wait to see where this goes!
K
1/3/20, 3:55 PM
To be honest I never ever wish the good side win so bad like this and I love master and slave story... but this time please god save Joe at least !! I really enjoy the story thanks! : )
1/3/20, 3:25 PM
In my mind, Priapus of Milet is illustrating this series.
Anonymous
1/3/20, 2:35 PM
i for one hope you finish the story exactly how its supposed to. great writing i love your dark take. team Todd fuck those weak minded people ;)
Anonymous
1/3/20, 1:23 PM
I'm glad Carter has standards, and not messing with relationships