Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/4/20, 2:11 PM
Really happy to see this continue - and great writing as always. Carter's transformation is a really neat idea - excited to see more of him!
Anonymous
1/4/20, 1:29 PM
I hope Liam gets diaper punished
Anonymous
1/4/20, 12:24 PM
Liam sounds more like a 10 year old than a 19 year old. Curious to see where this goes.
LongtimeFan
1/4/20, 11:32 AM
Another great chapter! I love the self-awareness Adrien possesses (the line "the hero of a story he didn't ask to be in" is pure poetry--I shuddered!), and the interesting implication of Cheslav's powers. Plus the hypnosis scene was achingly hot...call me old-fashioned, but a guy getting sleepy and relaxed and compliant is such a turn-on. Awesome stuff! :)
Anonymous
1/4/20, 11:13 AM
some mistakes in Italian sentences
Anonymous
1/4/20, 9:04 AM
hope to see Miles again but i do not mind if there be a sequel!!
lucasthemighty@gmail.com
1/4/20, 9:03 AM
It is an amazing story so far. It would be awesome to see Nathan fall pray to Todd, though.
nerdysuitedbaby
1/4/20, 6:59 AM
You know I love the Shawn character mind fuck. This was a decent chapter although like I have mentioned felt Mike needed it built broader based on the visual in chapter 1 with him call the shots manhandling Todd and in a sense Nathan. To me to matching band and chess board was the superior mind fucks. Loving the comments on this just as much as I love this story. Going to DM you just had to see how you went with this.
Anonymous
1/4/20, 6:02 AM
I really like where this is going. Quite honestly, I'm not sure if I want Nathan to fall and become part of Todd's club. He is so much better being an outsider looking in and being an outcast. What I want for sure is Todd to succeed in the end. I kinda want him to take down his brother next. He should see his text message from Nathan's phone and know where they're meeting. I admit, this is just the shallow side of me, but one small complaint i have in this series is that I want more man on man sex action. But thats just my personal opinion, I still would like the author to do his own thing and write as he pleases.
K
1/4/20, 5:42 AM
I really want to see what will happen next now! lol It a cool chapter I like how the teacher became a slave And I really ship Nathan with Joe. Nathan always "Joe so cuteee " like this, so I wish he fight all the way he could to save him or make him his PS. as always save Joe please!!!